Scarfy
Stephen J Sweeney
I've got some flashback chapters in my current novel that I want to subtitle to make it a little clearer they are such. As I want these to be centred around a particular moment in time (a point at which a character was cursed), I want to say "xxx years before ..."
Four year before the affliction
or
Four years before the infliction
I avoided saying "before the curse" as there is a flashback set a few years after the curse was inflicted and saying, "xxx years after the curse" makes it sound as though the curse was lifted.
Thoughts?
Four year before the affliction
or
Four years before the infliction
I avoided saying "before the curse" as there is a flashback set a few years after the curse was inflicted and saying, "xxx years after the curse" makes it sound as though the curse was lifted.
Thoughts?