Making a new book

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I have been in the process of making a new book, and I finished the layout of it. But I seem to be having a hard time writing it, does anyone have any idea how to help? I keep losing motivation for writing but I love it very much. I don't want to give it up
 
Do you mean the layout—which would be the format of the pages in a book—or do you mean you have finished an outline, which would be a description of the events of an actual story?

Because if you have reached the point of finishing an actual outline, the advice might be different than if you mean the other.
 
Hello and Welcome to the Chrons!

If the "layout" you're talking about is an outline of the novel, so what you've done is write the story in a kind of summary form, then it might simply be that you're a pantser by nature not a plotter. By and large, plotters like having outlines and they're happy to fill in all the details afterwards, whereas pantsers like finding out about the story, and enjoy the scribbling down, but once they know the story they sometimes lose enthusiasm for the actual writing. If that's the case, then it might be an idea to put this current project on hold and start writing another, but instead of planning it in advance, just write.

Alternatively, sometimes new writers have great and wonderful ideas, but then get a kind of paralysis when it comes to the actual writing because they're afraid of mucking it all up and not being able to do justice to the ideas. In that event I'd always suggest parking the marvellous ideas for a while and write something else instead, so as to build up confidence in both oneself and one's writing ability.

I think, also, that for some reason writing a book is looked on as being easy -- we all write at school, our friends tell us they love our stories, we read novels and think "I could do better than that!" so how hard can it be?! But no one ever says "Carving wood is easy" and gets in a bit of dead tree and a chisel and thinks they'll be the next Grinling Gibbons. We recognise that it's important for a wood carver to learn about different woods and tools, and that he'll have to work on his craft for years before he gets good at it. Writing a novel -- a good novel -- is hard. You need to recognise that and just work through it. Work at it in the same way a top tennis player works at her game -- continual practice, pushing to get better, continual critical assessment and advice, training/learning, all the boring stuff.

Anyhow, my advice: whatever the source of the problem, leave the current story and write something else, at least for the time being. And just write. Don't worry if it's bad, just write. In between writing, read round all the posts here in Writing Discussion, especially our Toolbox thread, look at Critiques here and the Writing Challenges. And don't forget to come into Introductions and be welcomed officially!
 
When you say in the process of writing a new book.
Does that mean you have written things before?
If so, what?

I previously had written around 400 pages of work for two novel ideas and then fell away from it for quite some time.

My better half was snooping one day and sat reading some of the pages she'd pulled out of my briefcase--the one that was nicely hidden away.

She asked why I hadn't done anything more with it.

In a way that made her my agent.

It took some time after that before I really started.
I found that I had to find the voice for my main character and it turned out that those four hundred pages were just some of the back-story and that I really needed to start somewhere in the middle of the whole big story where things were really happening.

All the original was in third person; however that didn't seem to work for me and the MC so I switched to First person and before I knew It I had almost 700k words which was somewhere in the neighborhood of 1400 pages of double space 8 1/2 by 11 with 1 inch margins.

Find the voice and it will start talking to you; probably all day and in your sleep.
Be ready to start editing and trimming away the fat, because once motivated you will be knee deep in it.

Oh; yeah; welcome to SFFChronicles.
Make use of the 75, 100, 300 word contests--great way to learn how to economize in your writing.
Also look at the Critique forum-do some critiques- and get a feel for what other people do in their writing.
 

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