In my MS, I have a number of instances where I'm introducing a thing or profession (not title) name, type-of place names, and replacement names (slang terms) for various nouns--replacement verb terms I don't feel a need to do this with (perhaps incorrectly).
My question is, should I italicize the word on the first instance--when directly describing it--and perhaps even MUCH later when refreshing the reader's memory.
As an example, the protagonist is noting various drugs and their affects on visitors. In its rough form (unedited):
Those using enhanced speed called steam, looked manic; their faces red and veins bulging. The intense opiate-like narcotic slouch, caused people to plod about painlessly. Most here were high on the aphrodisiac slide, their amorous gaze telling. Syco and what they called scrud, caused people to twitch, jerk, and babble out of their minds.
Thanks for your help!
K2
My question is, should I italicize the word on the first instance--when directly describing it--and perhaps even MUCH later when refreshing the reader's memory.
As an example, the protagonist is noting various drugs and their affects on visitors. In its rough form (unedited):
Those using enhanced speed called steam, looked manic; their faces red and veins bulging. The intense opiate-like narcotic slouch, caused people to plod about painlessly. Most here were high on the aphrodisiac slide, their amorous gaze telling. Syco and what they called scrud, caused people to twitch, jerk, and babble out of their minds.
Thanks for your help!
K2