Exploration ship lands on planet which turns out to be heaven; Creator kept locked up in center of city

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This is a short story ID question that has been lingering on another forum, so I thought I'd try here. The plot is that a team of explorers land on a planet that is inhabited by human-like beings that have a "special quality" about them. The aliens are kind to the explorers and welcome them, gladly taking the explorers on a tour of their largest city.

From time to time, there are earthquakes, but none of the aliens will discuss these with the explorers. At the climax, it is revealed that the planet is heaven (and the aliens by implication angels) and that the earthquakes are caused by the Creator, who has unfortunately had to be locked up at the center of the city because he's no longer mentally stable.

I'd say that the story had a 50s/60s feel to it, but that's a tentative guess based on certain conventions, e.g. I think (but am not sure) that the explorer's ship was a rocket that lands tail first, and I think (but again am not sure) that the exploration team has a military command structure to it.
 
Woe is me! Danny McG had a whole week to think about it and no answer. I guess it's hopeless, then. :)
 
I saw that query on Stack Exchange months ago.
Several possible answers were proposed but none correctly fitted the search terms.
It could take years.

So it goes
 
The maddening part is that I've read the story! I admire your memory for names and titles; only a small percentage of stories stand out so strongly that I can recall those without making a special effort to take note of them.
 
Is there a chance you are misremembering Bradbury's "Mars is Heaven", or combining it with another story? Probably not, but I thought I would ask just in case.
 
Definitely not "Mars Is Heaven," and I'm almost certain that it's not a conflation of another story -- the original post on the other forum made me recall this story; that person's description was a spot-on plot summary.
 

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