Wayne Mack
Well-Known Member
Two suggestions that I pulled from Brandon Sanderson's lectures that I find useful are:
Give each main character a unique interest or concern. Use that focus to give the character an identifiable voice when using the character's POV or when the character is involved in dialogue.
Make each character the hero of his or her own story. Especially for villains or misguided characters, there should be a logical reason for them to act they way they do. Don't make a bad guy act just for the sake of being evil, give him or her a somewhat altruistic reason behind his or her actions.
Give each main character a unique interest or concern. Use that focus to give the character an identifiable voice when using the character's POV or when the character is involved in dialogue.
Make each character the hero of his or her own story. Especially for villains or misguided characters, there should be a logical reason for them to act they way they do. Don't make a bad guy act just for the sake of being evil, give him or her a somewhat altruistic reason behind his or her actions.