This is the first part of the novel I have worked on since joining Chronicles. It is a fantasy novel. In the novel there are the Greek gods, but the setting is not Earth. It is a different planet. The best term I can think of to describe the writing is Olympian fantasy. Please let me know what you think.
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“By the light of the two moons, you are a beauty.” Kassillius admired the blond curls and blue eyes of Aphroti, brightened by the moonlight from Chariot and Equi. This night they showed brightly in the clear night sky.
“So nice of you. Do you say that to all you try to suitor?” Sitting on the bench, her face turned up a little to the soldier beside her. The young man she knew most of her life presented himself that night looking his best, with his dark hair combed in place. Clean shaven with the scent of cinnamon oil, she could tell he hoped to impress her, or more likely arouse her. Add to that he wore his dress uniform of the city army. With the hoplite insignia sewn on his chest, and that of a scout on the upper right arm, she did appreciate the gesture. She also enjoyed the nice dinner they just finished.
A little laugh came from the eighteen-year-old man. “The only one I am interested in suiting is you. Gives the personal touch. Not to mention realistic. Nevertheless, you are a beauty.” Her full-length blue dress fit her nicely, covering her shoulders and arms. How nice it felt they didn’t wear the clothes of their ancestors, that had to be pinned at the shoulders to prevent the garment from falling off. Her wool cloak allowed her to be warm on the late Autumn evening, just as his kept the cold out.
“Well, the dinner was nice.” She gazed at their city River Bend, looking upstream and downstream at the river that flowed from the volcanic mountain to the Trident Sea. “However, I should be going back home instead of paying homage to Dionysius with another glass of wine. One was quite satisfying. Besides, don’t you have to get ready for that trip tomorrow?”
“My task? I don’t have to wake up early for that journey. But if you wish, I shall take you home.” He stood up, offering his right hand to help her up. Smiling, she gently grabbed the edge of it with her right hand as she stood up, then immediately released it.
As they began their journey towards her home, he briefly looked at his classmate of several years. They both finished their academic work at Potomon School a couple years ago. She will soon finish her apprenticeship in tailoring, specializing in wool attire. “You need my cloak for extra warmth?” The air was getting cooler as night set in.
“No, but thank you for offering Kass. I’m fine. Besides, you don’t need to get sick if you have work tomorrow.”
Kassillius left it at that. His wool cloak did keep him warm, however he could tolerate the cooling temperature for a little while. Through the winding streets he escorted her home, noticing the fronts of different homes. All the window shutters on the second floors were closed to keep the cool air out. The walls surrounding the courtyards displayed the decorations of the upcoming Long Night festival.
“Thank you for the dinner Kassillius.” Aphroti turned to look at him as she came to the front of the gate of her home. “I would think you need to go home to prepare for tomorrow.”
The young lady presented a polite way of not showing affection at the end of their time together, he concluded quickly. “There is no rush leaving tomorrow, but nothing wrong with an extended rest tonight. Thank you for the evening Aphroti. May the gods bless you.”
“Safe travels tomorrow Kassillius.” She turned to her gate and allowed herself in.
Walking with a slight brisk pace towards home, he couldn’t resist whispering to himself. “No kiss.” A stranger would have been lost trying to navigate the twisting of the streets of the neighborhood, but he lived there his whole life so he could find his way home even with his eyes closed. It did not take long until he came to the front gate of his home. After opening the lock, he entered the courtyard then came to the front door. Turning the door handle, he pulled on it to open the door. He couldn’t. Barred. His family should have remembered he would be home after his dinner out.
Three knocks on the door came with a response. “Whose here at this time?” Hestira. His mother.
“Me.” He answered calmly. There was no point being upset at being locked out when his family should have expected him home after dinner. It wasn’t the first time this happened. It would most likely not be the last.
“Don’t know why you couldn’t be at your barracks” Hestira stated with irritation as she removed the wooden beam, allowing her oldest son to open the door.
“I live here.” He responded as calmly as he could while closing the door. “I’m not a mercenary from another city. It saves coin for River Bend.”
“Not laying with that Aphroti tonight. Thought so. Told you she was too good for you.”
“I was simply taking her to a meal near the river.”
“Sure.” A slight frown with some squinting of the eyes appeared on Irene’s face. “Your brother may like you to still be here, but you need to soon find a new home. I’ve raised you for eighteen circles of the seasons. You’re a man now, at least supposed to be. The army think you’re so good, they can give you a cot.”
“More chests needed for Sindy’s clothes, and need the extra space?” Kassillius’ tone of his voice showed no concern for his sister’s wardrobe.
Quick as she could for her age, Hestira immediately slapped her oldest son with her right palm. “Don’t talk like that about Synthia! Just go lay down for the night.”Hestira did not realize it, but watching the interaction was her youngest son Olympio, who has seen such interactions before. Kassillius realized it, like before.
“I’m going outside, then to bed.” The eighteen-year-old calmly walked away from his mother and proceeded to go behind the house. After using the outhouse, he went back inside and proceeded to the room he shared with his eight-year-old brother.
Taking off his clothes, he laid down with his head on the pile of hay covered by an old blanket and pulled over him the blanket on his cot. While his parents and sister laid on separate couches at night, Kassillius and Olympio slept on pieces of leather attached to a rectangular frame, raised on legs to keep it off the floor, and away from potential bugs crawling at night.
“Sorry Kass” came the voice of the eight-year-old in the room, soft enough that others won’t hear but his older brother would.
“Hey. Nothing for you to be sorry about. I’m sorry you saw that, Ollie.” The older brother responded in a whisper.
“You leaving tomorrow? For good?”
“No no Ollie. Army gave me a task. I leave in the morning, but I’ll be back in a few days. Don’t worry.”
“Wish I can go with you. Be more fun.” The younger brother’s voice sounded a little dejected.
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“By the light of the two moons, you are a beauty.” Kassillius admired the blond curls and blue eyes of Aphroti, brightened by the moonlight from Chariot and Equi. This night they showed brightly in the clear night sky.
“So nice of you. Do you say that to all you try to suitor?” Sitting on the bench, her face turned up a little to the soldier beside her. The young man she knew most of her life presented himself that night looking his best, with his dark hair combed in place. Clean shaven with the scent of cinnamon oil, she could tell he hoped to impress her, or more likely arouse her. Add to that he wore his dress uniform of the city army. With the hoplite insignia sewn on his chest, and that of a scout on the upper right arm, she did appreciate the gesture. She also enjoyed the nice dinner they just finished.
A little laugh came from the eighteen-year-old man. “The only one I am interested in suiting is you. Gives the personal touch. Not to mention realistic. Nevertheless, you are a beauty.” Her full-length blue dress fit her nicely, covering her shoulders and arms. How nice it felt they didn’t wear the clothes of their ancestors, that had to be pinned at the shoulders to prevent the garment from falling off. Her wool cloak allowed her to be warm on the late Autumn evening, just as his kept the cold out.
“Well, the dinner was nice.” She gazed at their city River Bend, looking upstream and downstream at the river that flowed from the volcanic mountain to the Trident Sea. “However, I should be going back home instead of paying homage to Dionysius with another glass of wine. One was quite satisfying. Besides, don’t you have to get ready for that trip tomorrow?”
“My task? I don’t have to wake up early for that journey. But if you wish, I shall take you home.” He stood up, offering his right hand to help her up. Smiling, she gently grabbed the edge of it with her right hand as she stood up, then immediately released it.
As they began their journey towards her home, he briefly looked at his classmate of several years. They both finished their academic work at Potomon School a couple years ago. She will soon finish her apprenticeship in tailoring, specializing in wool attire. “You need my cloak for extra warmth?” The air was getting cooler as night set in.
“No, but thank you for offering Kass. I’m fine. Besides, you don’t need to get sick if you have work tomorrow.”
Kassillius left it at that. His wool cloak did keep him warm, however he could tolerate the cooling temperature for a little while. Through the winding streets he escorted her home, noticing the fronts of different homes. All the window shutters on the second floors were closed to keep the cool air out. The walls surrounding the courtyards displayed the decorations of the upcoming Long Night festival.
“Thank you for the dinner Kassillius.” Aphroti turned to look at him as she came to the front of the gate of her home. “I would think you need to go home to prepare for tomorrow.”
The young lady presented a polite way of not showing affection at the end of their time together, he concluded quickly. “There is no rush leaving tomorrow, but nothing wrong with an extended rest tonight. Thank you for the evening Aphroti. May the gods bless you.”
“Safe travels tomorrow Kassillius.” She turned to her gate and allowed herself in.
Walking with a slight brisk pace towards home, he couldn’t resist whispering to himself. “No kiss.” A stranger would have been lost trying to navigate the twisting of the streets of the neighborhood, but he lived there his whole life so he could find his way home even with his eyes closed. It did not take long until he came to the front gate of his home. After opening the lock, he entered the courtyard then came to the front door. Turning the door handle, he pulled on it to open the door. He couldn’t. Barred. His family should have remembered he would be home after his dinner out.
Three knocks on the door came with a response. “Whose here at this time?” Hestira. His mother.
“Me.” He answered calmly. There was no point being upset at being locked out when his family should have expected him home after dinner. It wasn’t the first time this happened. It would most likely not be the last.
“Don’t know why you couldn’t be at your barracks” Hestira stated with irritation as she removed the wooden beam, allowing her oldest son to open the door.
“I live here.” He responded as calmly as he could while closing the door. “I’m not a mercenary from another city. It saves coin for River Bend.”
“Not laying with that Aphroti tonight. Thought so. Told you she was too good for you.”
“I was simply taking her to a meal near the river.”
“Sure.” A slight frown with some squinting of the eyes appeared on Irene’s face. “Your brother may like you to still be here, but you need to soon find a new home. I’ve raised you for eighteen circles of the seasons. You’re a man now, at least supposed to be. The army think you’re so good, they can give you a cot.”
“More chests needed for Sindy’s clothes, and need the extra space?” Kassillius’ tone of his voice showed no concern for his sister’s wardrobe.
Quick as she could for her age, Hestira immediately slapped her oldest son with her right palm. “Don’t talk like that about Synthia! Just go lay down for the night.”Hestira did not realize it, but watching the interaction was her youngest son Olympio, who has seen such interactions before. Kassillius realized it, like before.
“I’m going outside, then to bed.” The eighteen-year-old calmly walked away from his mother and proceeded to go behind the house. After using the outhouse, he went back inside and proceeded to the room he shared with his eight-year-old brother.
Taking off his clothes, he laid down with his head on the pile of hay covered by an old blanket and pulled over him the blanket on his cot. While his parents and sister laid on separate couches at night, Kassillius and Olympio slept on pieces of leather attached to a rectangular frame, raised on legs to keep it off the floor, and away from potential bugs crawling at night.
“Sorry Kass” came the voice of the eight-year-old in the room, soft enough that others won’t hear but his older brother would.
“Hey. Nothing for you to be sorry about. I’m sorry you saw that, Ollie.” The older brother responded in a whisper.
“You leaving tomorrow? For good?”
“No no Ollie. Army gave me a task. I leave in the morning, but I’ll be back in a few days. Don’t worry.”
“Wish I can go with you. Be more fun.” The younger brother’s voice sounded a little dejected.