You also need guidance, which you can get through two means: one, increase unbelievably, and I mean A LOT, the number of books you read a week. Yes, I said okay. In the week, not a year. Because if you want to progress, and I imagine you want to do it fast, you have to become a true piranha that devours everything that passes through its eyes. A fifteen-year-old reads an book a day, to give you an idea. Even read medicine labels. But he also reads critically, that is, paying attention to how those books have been written. An excellent guide to help you know how to read, why to read and what to read is obviously the eternally endearing Harold Bloom. It may be redundant, but I assume you have already read Shakespeare, Alexandre Dumas, Borges, Chandler, James Ellroy, Homer (
the Iliad and
the Odyssey), Don Quixote de la Mancha, Madame Bovary,
One Hundred Years of Solitude,
The Savage Detectives, etc. . And if not, start now. Because it happens that many beginner writers make the mistake of believing that just writing is enough and it is not. That's like rowing with only one oar.
Two: the second reading that you should increase significantly is the one related to the theory of writing. For that, my best bedside guide is still
On Writing, by Stephen King. That name sounds familiar to you, doesn't it?
But the road is long. It's a mountain you want to climb, so go slowly. And don't forget to live either.