Never Enough Seeing by John A. Frochio

[Glitch]

The eye never has enough of seeing.

Ecclesiastes 1:8​

Megan’s mind wasn’t focusing. What was wrong with her?

She was crossing a busy intersection. The WALK light flashed like a beacon of warning. She had only so much time before the light would change. Keep moving. Focus.

Work was getting to her. Too much stress. She needed a change; maybe a new job.

Stop thinking about these things. Concentrate.

Her vision was acting up again. A well-dressed woman, a young man in casual attire, and two men in suits and ties had been walking toward her. A few other people also crossed her line of vision. But now the number of people multiplied several times over until there were dozens.

The images were dizzying.

Was that herself among all those people? She was walking toward herself, as though she were walking toward a mirror.

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[The Judge]

I know Cat's Cradle was interested in knowing the Chrons names for our Kraxon writers, so just to confirm that the author of this great story is our one and only johnnyjet!

 

[Mark_Harbinger]

I enjoyed that.

 

[johnnyjet]

I know Cat's Cradle was interested in knowing the Chrons names for our Kraxon writers, so just to confirm that the author of this great story is our one and only johnnyjet!

Thanks for the reveal and kind words, Judge!

And I'm glad you enjoyed it, Mark.

 

[Cat's Cradle]

Oh, cool! I will be reading this today! Congrats on having another story published, John!
And thank you TJ, for verifying the member name - I thought this was jj, but am happy to have it verified. CC

edit to add:
Terrific work, John! Very nice story idea, and well told. I thought the ending was particularly strong, and well written - I was quite happy with the way things turned out (don't want to give anything away). Congratulations on a fine effort, and again for the new publishing credit.

 

[Guanazee]

Well done! A very enjoyable read. You packed a lot in there while still allowing us the time to immerse.

 

[johnnyjet]

Thanks for all the great comments!