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That sounds like the kind of story I'd enjoy and could give a good feedback on .Hi, I am looking for a reader for a full book. 112k words.
Set a few hundred years in the future it is (somewhat) hard science fiction mixed with space opera. The story is both a road trip and a prison break.
The book has already gone through a chapter by chapter edit with a critique group yet now I am looking for a big picture critique.
Timeline that I would like for feedback --a month or two
Nit- picking - I'm maybe a third of the way through it. I've spotted 5 or 6 typos/ wrong words used/ sentences that don't make sense or are poorly constructed.The book has already gone through a chapter by chapter edit with a critique group
I'll send you a detailed list when I finish but for now I want to continue enjoying this storyNit- picking - I'm maybe a third of the way through it. I've spotted 5 or 6 typos/ wrong words used/ sentences that don't make sense or are poorly constructed.
Your critique group must skim a little!
None of these issues affect the main (quite gripping) plot, but my brain is screaming Nooooo!
Explanation:- I spent several years checking documentation packages for transporting nuclear fuel around the world, even minor errors are task stoppers so my subconscious picks them up as I read anything
I suspect they are my fault rather than the critique groups... They usually catch everything, then I go and rewrite stuff and fudge things up again :/Your critique group must skim a little!
What's the genre? I'm okay with most stuff but clueless about cyberpunk.Hello everybody I have fresh, hot 5k worder, straight from 3 draft.
Anyone?
Anyone?
Can you mail it? It'll take me a week to get back, and I'm no literary expert (prob low standard primary school level on the technical stuff anyway) but happy to give feedbackWell it’s a myth (I guess) but the setting is modern…’ish…
I am not sure it does belong to any existing genre, Its very experimental.
Speculative fiction for sure
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