I have an odd request for a writing forum in that it is audio* so no prob if this request is tierra non boncatus (or words to that effect). I'm writing a novel and am reading it as I go. I'd be keen to see if the plot is coherent enough to follow, if the pace is too slow, and also if the narration is clear enough to understand.
Am up to Chapter 6 of about 56, and would like to troubleshoot big problems before too long in.
*I struggle with spelling and grammar, and also make up words -so the text would not be a fair infliction