congratulations @ genelewis for a convincing and deserved victory
Thanks to all who mentioned my effort and extra thanks to @ mosaix, @ Ursa major and @ emrosenagel for kindly voting for it.
I must admit that I recognised that adding humor was anything but Lovecraftian, and likely to miss the mark somewhat but I tempered this with the potential for horror implied by the title. Should I have actually had Ian tear his kids in half, whilst without a doubt more on point, it would likely have been a tad too much.
Still struggling with the 300.
Thanks to all who mentioned my effort and extra thanks to @ mosaix, @ Ursa major and @ emrosenagel for kindly voting for it.
I must admit that I recognised that adding humor was anything but Lovecraftian, and likely to miss the mark somewhat but I tempered this with the potential for horror implied by the title. Should I have actually had Ian tear his kids in half, whilst without a doubt more on point, it would likely have been a tad too much.
Still struggling with the 300.
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