300 Word Writing Challenge -- #55 (October 2024) -- VICTORY TO MOSAIX!

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The mist creeps up onto the ridge, its ash-grey coils slinking like a cat around Alys and the others, before sidling towards the gallows. But it’s already filled the valley of Deadman’s Vale, where it’s thick and deep and dark.​
“A strange phenomenon,” says the witnessing city magistrate, peering down the sheer drop. “One might almost think it possible to walk upon that fog.”​
Alys agrees, as she’s agreed to everything since the men arrived. As village reeve she knows how to propitiate those in authority, while making them do exactly as she wants. Even the witchfinder, whose men have finished binding the two young women.​
At the horizon, a pale dawn begins to break. The women’s struggles have ended and they weep quietly. Their uncle is in high good humour – with their execution, their dead mother’s wealth is his.​
“A pity, Mistress Reeve, that you did not identify the witches when they arrived at your hamlet,” the witchfinder says yet again. “We would then have been spared these weeks searching for them.”​
“We’d have been spared this lengthy walk, if we’d thrown them into the river as I suggested,” says the uncle.​
“Witches can swim,” he’s reminded. “They cannot fly.” The witchfinder nods to his men. “It’s time.”​
The two women are hurled into the Vale. Screams end abruptly as they plunge into the mist.​
The uncle grins and congratulates the witchfinder. Alys smiles to herself. On their long ride back to the city, the two men will become enraged, fight, and kill each other. The drink she gave them earlier will ensure that.​
Meanwhile, down in the Vale, her sisters would be freeing the women, the thick valley mist having caught and held them safely.​
And the city men would never know they’d missed the real witches.​
 
Needy Baby, Greedy Baby

Shall I tell you what happened? Why I’d grown resentful?

I’m the last branch on the family tree, the final leaf in autumn.

And so, within the mists of a reddened Hallow’s Eve (which only served to make me grieve), I grew resentful. Fate had hung over my baby’s crib like a mobile, but the crib stood empty because my baby’s death had happened offstage.

(Instage?)

A vesper bell never tolled to remind me that my babe was gone, so I grew resentful, like an empty house, or rather, an empty womb.

As if things couldn’t get worse, I’d developed the Big Malignancy. An irregular pain in my breast; a pinch and a punch for the first of the month, eh?

So, two things in the space of a week. Were they related, or was it coincidence? A shadow had fallen on me like winter.
I was able to smile, though, when the doctor reassured me the twist inside my breast wasn’t cancer. But that smile was just a lid to cork my screams.

The next day, after rallying (somewhat), I rose from a bed that seemed more like an open grave, and tried another healer altogether.

‘Come in, dear,’ Sally said, with a strange grimace. I’d found her online, on the National Federation of Spiritual Healers’ website.

Her lounge — a seventies miscarriage itself — carried a tide mark of curios and trinkets along a dado rail, that looked like the scum from a bath, or high tide; twisted wooden poppets, tumbled glass, eyeless gulls…

‘This is a mistake,’ I’d said, backing away, but she tilted her head with such heartbreaking sympathy, such empathic indulgence in her eyes, I stayed.
‘I suppose you want me to help him move into the light?’ she said.
‘Him who?’

She pointed to my breast.

 

The Fixer


No one knows from where the points of light come. Or what they do, why they do it and why they then vanish. I say no one, but I know, sort of. Of course, how I know has to be kept a secret.
Before I let you in on it -- I shouldn’t really, but I can’t resist -- you ought to know something about me. I'm one of the grunts who keep worlds like yours operating as they ought to. Yes, that sounds a funny way of putting it, but that's how it is.
Many of you may have guessed that the world is not as it seems, one which scientists and mathematicians cannot explain. That's because it can’t be explained in their terms.
Yours is a simulated world. You are simulations. For all that, you are no less real than if your world was like mine. Don’t worry! You are more important in my employers’ eyes than I am, even though I hold your existence in my hands. (Not that I have hands).
I am a bug fixer, and those points of light that appear randomly are bugs that are literally highlighted in your reality. Why they appear that way, I don’t know.
Truth be told, the fundamental workings of the simulation is a mystery to me… and probably to everyone else. It's a very long time since it was created and since its documentation wasn't. And just as in your world, most of the actual software is from even older libraries that haven't been properly maintained since their creators either died or discovered they had better things to do.
But don't worry. When my indiscretion comes to… er… light, some other poor grunt will be here to fix the bugs (and wipe your memories).
 
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