Timben
Well-Known Member
Wanted to know if adding "just" to a lot of the dialog is necessary.
With a resigned sigh, the bartender retrieved another bottle, this one glistening under the dim coal oil lamp. As he handed it over, he muttered, “Just don’t hit me again.” Odin smirked, the tension easing just a fraction. “I might just let you live,” he replied, taking the bottles in one hand and tossing a few coins onto the counter with the other. The bartender watched a mixture of relief and dread swirling within him, as Odin and Challi sauntered away, a king surveying his domain, leaving chaos in his wake. Dusty jumped down onto the sawdust floor and followed them out.
With a resigned sigh, the bartender retrieved another bottle, this one glistening under the dim coal oil lamp. As he handed it over, he muttered, “Just don’t hit me again.” Odin smirked, the tension easing just a fraction. “I might just let you live,” he replied, taking the bottles in one hand and tossing a few coins onto the counter with the other. The bartender watched a mixture of relief and dread swirling within him, as Odin and Challi sauntered away, a king surveying his domain, leaving chaos in his wake. Dusty jumped down onto the sawdust floor and followed them out.