Fan Fiction
Does anyone have any ideas for sequel or prequels to this movie? They should have an Equilibrium forum and one for fan fiction. I have 2 sequel ideas of mine below.
Equilibrium 2: Fight to go back in balance
Casting Suggestions
Christian Bale (Equilibrium, Shaft, Batman Begins) as Police Commissioner John Preston
Ray Liotta (No Escape, Goodfellas, Hannibal, Copland, Turbulence) as Tony Maine
Jennifer Lopez (Out of Sight, Money Train) as Vice President Jessica Sanchez-Preston
William Fichtner (Pearl Harbor, Equilibrium, Michael Mann's Heat, Armageddon) as Jurgen the president of world and the former Libria
Matthew Harbour (Equilibrium) as Robbie Preston
Emily Siewert (Equilibrium) as Lisa Preston
Daniel Lee Clark (Equilibrium) as Police Chief Sanders (former sweeper team leader)
Britney Spears (pop singer) as Luciferian thug Keira
Justin Timberlake (member of N’Sync) as Luciferian thug Jack
JC Chavez (member of N’Sync) as Luciferian thug Carlos
Lance Bass (member of N’Sync) as Lucferian thug Max
Joey Fatone (member of N’Sync) as Luciferian thug Greg
Chris Kirkpatrick (member of N’Sync) as Lucfierian thug Christian
Christian Kahrmann (Equilibrium) as Officer in Charge somewhere in the sequel
The same actors as surviving resistance fighters. I am not so sure on who should play Melissa Parker step daughter of Police Commissioner John Preston or the Luciferian thugs. Maybe someone else as a chemist. Not even so sure who should play the minister.
Plot Summary: John Preston the highest ranking cleric becomes the commissioner of police. Jurgen and his followers all along live when Libria has fallen. Their executioners themselves stop the executions. John Preston meets a sexy Hispanic single mother who lost her husband to to sense offense like John Preston lost his wife to the society too. Her name is Jessica Sanchez. She has a daughter named Melissa. Jurgen and Jessica Sanchez are the president and vice president of the land of New York. New York City was once Libria. John Preston had years ago killed Dupont and Brant. The surviving clerics sign a treaty of freedom from the oppressive anti emotions. Now dark forces led by Tony Maine the chief of state have come to take over. Kiera, Carlos, Greg, Max, Christian and Jack are seconds in command. They are would be sense offenders to the tattoos. The female has a pierced bellybutton. They would be off the prozium in Libria. They plot to kill Jurgen and his followers. Tony Maine is gathered together with several men and women in a devil worship scheme. Tony Maine is a master of sorcery and devil worship leader. Tony Maine can split himself into many copies of himself through sorcery. In this time sorcery becomes realistic. John Preston under orders of Jurgen is to arrest Tony Maine and his devil worship band. John Preston must find out that Tony Maine is behind the evil scheme in Luciferian world domination. The cops who were once known as clerics are to bring down the Satanic clan before they take over the world. John Preston must save his wife and kids along with Jurgen before they are killed. It is just a guess that in the first Equilibrium that Libria is New York City in the future. Also Mary O'Brian did die. John Preston failed to stop her execution. But the execution of Jurgen and the rest of his band had been stopped by the executioners and the guards by faking their executions as John Preston killed Cleric Brant and Vice Council Dupont. Father was once leader of the land. He died and Dupont took his place.
Beginning
Scene 1
Introduction with flashbacks from the movie and opening credits. Former Grammaton Cleric John Preston does narration. John Preston (O S): "My name is John Preston. I am the commissioner of the New York City Police Department. I was born when Libria was formed. I was trained my whole life as a police officer. There was a society that outlawed things that trigger emotions. I enforced those laws. I was once known as a grammaton cleric. I had lost my first wife in to this society for breaking the law. She stopped taking her prozium and was incinerated for it. I had failed to stop the execution of Mary O’Brien. I had arrested her for sense offense. I had stopped taking my prozium and turned my back on the society with laws that I enforced. Secretly Father had died. His right hand man Dupont had taken his place. My son Robbie was on path to becoming a cleric. I had saved a dog when I started the fight for freedom. I was really too refusal to kill a dog because I believe that it’s animal cruelty. I had joined Jurgen and he had me be the one to kill Father. I killed Cleric Brant and Vice Council Dupont. Jurgen and the rest of the resistance were not executed. The guards and the executioners had abandoned their job and turned the incineration chamber into a dance hall and a tattoo parlor both. Tattoos were outlawed because they were artwork. Now that we are feeling again and I arrested people for tattoos and piercings I still hate them. Jurgen had agreed to outlaw smoking because it’s disrespect to other people’s breathing space. Cigarettes stink. Music had been illegal. Art and music had again become legal. Jurgen had become president of the world. A woman named Jessica Sanchez who has a daughter became vice president. I married her. She too is widowed to a sense offender. Jurgen had made me commissioner of the former Libria’s police department. A devil worshipper has invented a device to make many multiples of himself. He and his forces are out to take over the world. They aren’t anti emotions tyrants. I am out to stop them."
Fade In
Scene 2
At the place that was once known as the palace of justice at night time. The palace of justice is a dance hall and tattoo parlor in one building. Inside there are people dancing and having a party. They are somewhere in the building. There are Dee Jays there too. There are people going to get punch and other snacks. The music is music of the future created when Libria has fallen and John Preston has freed people from anti emotions fascism. There are teens at the dance too.
Somewhere outside there is Tony Maine in demonic clothing. He is wearing a hood and cloak. He has a device on his arm that can multiply him many times. He pushes a button. There are several copies of Tony Maine. They pull out knives. He sends his multiples into the dance hall. Maine: "I should have fun. Bring down the dance hall. I want to former Libria." The real Tony Maine vanishes.
Back inside the building. Many multiples of Luciferian leader Tony Maine enter the building. Somewhere one of the multiples hits the light switches and turns them off. The multiples scatter the building. People in the dance hall part of the building scream. Dee Jay: "Hey!" Dee Jay #2: "Who turned out the lights?" Party Teen Boy: "Hey! This isn’t funny."
Scene 3
Later on the NY PD shows up with guns drawn from their cars. John Preston commissioner of the police shows up. John Preston draws his guns. John Preston: "I’ll need you to turn the lights back on. Look for the multiples of this mystery villain. Shoot them." John Preston bursts into the building. His officers with the flashlights on their guns have the flashlights on. They scan for demonic multiples. John Preston finds some. He shoots them. John Preston: "You go with your squad scan the tattoo parlor." There’s an officer in charge who goes to the tattoo parlor with some other clerics. John Preston has another officer in charge go to the dance hall. One team doesn’t find any in the tattoo parlor. They report that to Commissioner Preston. Officer In Charge: "Commissioner Preston. There is nothing in the tattoo parlor." John Preston with his officers go into the dance hall. John Preston: "They must be in the dance hall. Let’s all go in there. Get everyone there to safety." John Preston’s officers who are a former grammaton team gets the people in the dance hall to safety. John Preston: "Everyone get to somewhere safe. We are going to take care of those evil multiples." For what John Preston has been trained for he finds the multiples of the devil worship ring leader in the dance hall. They attack with knives. John Preston shoots them with some gun fighting style like he did with sense offenders before he stopped taking his prozium. The other cops turn the lights back on. The other cops pull off masks of the multiples and don’t find a single face. A chemist scans the faces. He finds them to be multiples of a man. Chemist: "There is nothing. They are multiples." John Preston: "All of you get back to what you were doing. Everything is taken care of." Everyone goes back to dancing. The disk jockeys come back to.
Scene 4
The next day at the council chamber. John Preston goes to the office of Jurgen. John Preston’s second wife is there. Her name is Jessica Sanchez-Preston. She is the new vice president of the world. She is a sexy Hispanic woman. Also in the office is Tony Maine the chief of state and Luciferian ring leader. Jurgen introduces Tony Maine to John Preston. Jurgen: "Commissioner Preston this is Tony Maine. He is our new chief of state." They shake hands. John Preston is being put on assignment by Tony Maine on the devil worship incident. Maine: "A man has invented a device that can multiply him into many copies of himself. We must find out who the leader is. They even go into tattoo parlors." Jessica: "John. Be careful. You know that I lost my first husband to Libria like you lost your first wife." John Preston: "I think that I will investigate the tattoo parlor." Jurgen: "You aren’t going to get a tattoo now that you have overthrown Father years ago." John Preston: "Now that I am feeling I don’t like tattoos and body piercings."
Scene 5
Later on in the day at John Preston’s home. John Preston comes in the door. 3 kids are there too. One of them is Melissa Parker (a half white half Latina girl a year older than Robbie Preston). Melissa: "John." Robbie: "Dad." There are also Lisa and Robbie Preston. They are watching television. They are watching something on the history of Libria. There are shows that were made after Libria has fallen. They are learning about the freedom of man. The television is on the wall. John Preston: "We have new enemies. They are devil worshiping thugs. We have to find out the mastermind."
Scene 6
Later on at night. At the turf of devil worshippers in the place that was once known as the Nethers. There are flaming torches there. Tony Maine is there with several Luciferian thugs. There is a painted pentagram. There are 6 who are 2nds in command. 1 is the female named Kiera (female with long blonde hair and she has on a short shirt with her bellybutton pierced). 5 others are males (4 white 1 Latino) named Carlos, Greg, Max, Christian and Jack. These men have assorted tattoos. The 6 are would be sense offenders. Several of the thugs are men and women. Most of them are men. They are various races. Most of them are young. Maine: "John Preston has destroyed my multiples. He was once known as a grammaton cleric. He was trained his whole life to be a cop. We must kill him." Kiera: "What will we do?" Maine: "He and his wife were both widowed. Their first spouses were arrested and incinerated for sense offense when this was Libria. John Preston won the freedom from anti emotional fascism. If the highest ranking cleric hadn’t turned his back you would be executed for having a pierced bellybutton Kiera."
Scene 7
The next day at the police headquarters. John Preston is in a briefing room. His officers are taking seats. Many of them were grammaton clerics who have signed a freedom treaty when Libria has fallen. John Preston is briefing them of a devil worship force that wants to take over. John Preston: "A devil worship force has taken over the former Libria. We are a free feeling society. We are fighting for peace and freedom. I will check out a tattoo parlor. We are going to nail the devil worshippers. They will form a society worse than Libria. We must stop them." All those cops get up and leave the room with John Preston.
Scene 8
Later on at a safe house of the devil worshippers. John Preston shows up with his officers. They search. They all split up. Cop #1: "Commissioner Preston. We estimated that there are 30 multiples." John Preston: "Shoot them just as they attack you." There are more multiples of the leader. Some cops are being killed by multiples of Tony Maine with blades. John Preston shoots some multiples. A few others are stabbed. Other multiples go after Commissioner Preston. John Preston shoots them. John Preston shoots more with knives. John Preston: "Come and have it." They fall dead. The search team shows up. They scan them. They find them all out to be multiples. Search Officer: "They are just multiples of the leader." John Preston: "Then we’ll just have to un mask him." John Preston can’t find any devil worshipper out there. John Preston: "There are not devil worshipers out there."
Scene 9
At a tattoo parlor in the former incineration chamber. There are tattoo designs that the clerics destroyed when there was Libria. There are signs that say ‘body art’ and body jewelry’. There are some men and a woman tattooists. They have tattoos. The woman has a pierced eyebrow. They are also would be sense offenders. A person with a tattoo put on leaves the place. John Preston comes in. Female Tattooist: "Would you like a tattoo or a piercing?" John Preston: "No. I am not into this stuff." Tattooist #1: "What are you here for?" John Preston: "I am here for questioning you. Do you know anything about demonic looking people?" Tattooist #2: "I think that I do. There were lots of young people creepy looking in here." Tattooist #3: "Aren't you the hero who got us freedom for what we are doing?" John Preston: "Yes. I raided these kind of places in my days working for tyrants against emotions. Father would have you killed if he had still ruled Libria. I will then defeat those devil worshippers. I was the highest ranking cleric. You'd all for your tattoos and body piercings be combusted here right now. I learned that this society was wrong." Tattooist #3: "I have my nipples pierced." The 3rd tattooist lifts up his shirt and shows the piercing on his nipple. John Preston: "Do you have names?" Tattooist #2: "No. I just get paid. I don't know much of my customers." John Preston: "Thank you for your cooperation." John Preston walks out the door.
Scene 10
Later on at the office of Jurgen. There is Tony Maine coming in there. Maine: "I just got a report that a few officers were killed by the multiples. Commissioner Preston also investigated the tattoo parlor." Jurgen: "I would've been executed if John Preston hadn't joined me. The incineration chamber techs and guards watched the fall of Libria and let me go. They turned this place into a dance hall and tattoo parlor. Now go to Commissioner Preston’s wife’s office." Tony Maine leaves Jurgen’s office.
Tony Maine goes into the office of Jessica Preston. They talk. They are going over stuff on a computer screen. Jessica: "I have no identity of the Luciferian ring leader. But I do have pictures of the Luciferian thugs." Maine: "Have your husband put out an investigation." Jessica: "I am going home to my daughter and husband." Maine: "I heard that you and Commissioner Preston were both widowed to sense offenders." Jessica: "My first husband stopped taking his prozium just like John Preston’s first wife. They were both combusted in the city’s furnace. I helped turn it into a tattoo parlor and dance hall."
Scene 11
Later on at John Preston’s home at night time. Jessica Preston John Preston’s second wife is there back at home. She is with her daughter. Melissa: "Mommy." Jessica: "Melissa." John Preston’s 2 kids are there too. They are eating dinner. There is talk about the devil worshippers. Lisa: "Dad. Did you get any yet?" John Preston: "No. I couldn't find any of them involved." Jessica: "Your father Lisa is going to the church tomorrow. He is going to investigate."
Scene 12
The next morning at the Christian church. John Preston goes inside the church. John Preston goes over to a minister. He is Reverend Bloom. This is a person who married John Preston his 2nd wife over those past few years. They are talking about the Luciferian acts recently in the former Libria who is behind this. Rev Bloom: "Commissioner. Did you find those devil worshipers?" They don't find out. They are walking down the isle. John Preston: "All I got was the many multiples of the leader." Rev Bloom: "They want my church if they take over." John Preston: "I enforced laws against emotions. My first wife was arrested and incinerated for sense offense years ago."
Outside of the church there are multiples of Tony Maine. They come in and attack. Rev Bloom: "They must be here to destroy my church." John Preston gets the minister to safety. John Preston: "Hide under the chairs. They are here to kill you." John Preston pulls out 2 guns. John Preston shoots some who dash at him with knives. One of the multiples makes more multiples with the little device under his clothes. John Preston: "Oh No." More are made. John Preston with some special move shoots more of them. John Preston takes blades of the multiples that she shot. It’s a 10 minute knife fight between John Preston and many multiples of Tony Maine. John Preston cuts up and stabs many of them. All those lay dead. They vanish. John Preston: "You can come out of hiding now. I have killed them all." The minister comes back out of hiding. Rev Bloom: "Thank you former cleric." John Preston leaves the church.
Scene 13
Later on John Preston is in his office at police headquarters. He gets on the view phone to talk to his wife. John Preston: "Jessica. It’s me your husband John."
At the building where the president’s office is located. There is Jessica Sanchez at her desk. She is talking over a view phone to John Preston. Jessica: "Have you found out the ring leader yet?" John Preston: "No. We haven't." Jessica: "I know that you saved the minister." John Preston: "A multiple made more multiples." Tony Maine is somewhere in the building listening to the conversation with John Preston and his second wife. John Preston and his wife are done talking. Jessica: "Good bye." John Preston: "Good day to you Jess." They hang up. Tony Maine: "Got you."
Scene 14
Back at Police Headquarters. John Preston is leaving his office. He sees more multiples of Tony Maine the leader of the devil worship band. They pull out knives. John Preston alerts his officers. John Preston: "More multiples." Those cops ready their guns. They open fire at the multiples attack. Some cops are killed by multiples. John Preston gets in and opens fire on them. John Preston with his 2 guns kills a bunch of them. John Preston takes guns from the dead cops. She shoots the rest of the multiples. John Preston: "That’s the last of them."
Scene 15
The next day at the turf of the devil worshippers. There is Tony Maine talking to his thugs. His 6 seconds in command and would be sense offenders are there too. Many thugs are there. Tony Maine sends those 6 thugs in charge with the other thugs after John Preston’s kids and Jessica Preston’s kid. Maine: "You all bring me John Preston’s wife and children. I will get Jurgen at his office. I will surprise attack him. Let’s go now." They leave.
Scene 16
At the house of the Prestons during the day. The 6 would be sense offenders (Kiera, Carlos, Greg, Jack, Max and Christian) with the others burst in. There is Jessica Preston with her daughter, her step daughter and her step son. Carlos: "I need you all." Jessica: "Who are you?" Jack: "We are working for Tony Maine. He is the devil worship mastermind." Keira: "Tony Maine wants to see you all." Max: "Knock them out." Those thugs knock out John Preston’s wife and 3 children. Those thugs grab all of them. Greg: "Tony Maine should have Jurgen for us."
Later on at the office of Jurgen. Tony Maine goes in to see Jurgen to give him the report of the vice president kidnapped. Maine: "The vice president has been kidnapped." Jurgen: "Then alert Commissioner Preston. This is his wife." Tony Maine gets close to Jurgen. He knocks him out. Tony Maine meets with his thugs somewhere in the building. Christian: "We have the former cleric’s family." Maine: "Good. We should take over the world as they are all dead. We can kill Commissioner Preston." Other thugs knock out guards who were resistance fighters. Some of those who served in the resistance during the no emotions society are also taken. Those thugs have various vans. All the victims are taken into the vans.
Scene 17
Later on at nighttime. John Preston comes home in his car. He gets out. She sees something un usual. He pulls out his guns. John Preston: "Police." He sees more multiples of the devil worship leader. She shoots them as they attack him with knives. He kills them all.
Back at the police station. John Preston in his car shows up there. John Preston is
talking to Chief Sanders. John Preston: "Chief Sanders. My wife and kids have been kidnapped." Sanders: "I Know. We still don't have the leader yet." Chief Sanders was a cleric who signed a treaty for the freedom from anti emotions oppression of Father after the fall of Libria who got promoted that was the leader of the sweepers at John Preston’s home. John Preston and the police chief are doing a search for the turf of the Luciferian thugs. They find them at the Nethers. Sanders: "The Luciferians are in the Nethers." John Preston: "Then Let’s go there." They all leave.
Scene 18
At the turf of the devil worshippers at night time. There is Tony Maine with his cloak on. He has his hood removed. All those victims are to see the face of the leader before they die. Maine: "Ready them." There are the 6 second in commands. So are all the others in Tony Maine’s gang. Jurgen, some surviving rebels, John Preston’s wife and kids are there ready to be killed. Jurgen: "You. Maine. I trusted you." Jessica: "You will be fired as my husband comes here and arrests you." They have guns and machetes. Tony Maine has multiples of himself. Maine: "I invented this multiplying device. I could make multiples of myself so I could kill your husband."
John Preston somewhere else shows up with the SWAT team/former sweepers. They all have their guns ready. They are backing up John Preston. John Preston gets out of his car. The SWAT team with the Chief Sanders gets out of the SWAT truck. John Preston: "You guys rescue the victims. I will deal with them." The Tony Maine multiples attack. John Preston and his officers fire back. One tries to stab Chief Sanders and is shot in the back by John Preston. There are a countless number of multiples. John Preston goes over to the ritual. Maine: "Hail Lucifer! Tonight I kill the innocents and the infidels."
Tony Maine during his ritual sees John Preston commissioner of police. Tony Maine sends the Lucifer thugs to attack him. Maine: "Kill him." John Preston: "All you demonic people are under arrest. Put the guns down or I will fire on you." They have guns. John Preston fights them in a gun fight. He shoots several of them. They fall dead. There are others who attack with their hands. John Preston throws down his guns after shooting all those with guns. John Preston uses the marital arts that he was trained in during his training as a grammaton cleric. John Preston throws kicks on punches on those thugs.
Back to the SWAT team and Chief Sanders vs. the last of the multiples. Those cops shoot the rest of them. Sanders: "Let’s rescue them all." The SWAT team goes over to the victims. They go to rescue them.
Scene 19
John Preston is finishing off with the other thugs. The SWAT team with the police chief and SWAT commanders go over to rescue the people. Tony Maine makes more multiples of himself and they attack them. Maine: "Get them all." The SWATS fire back on them. John Preston defeats the rest of the devil worship group with the handles of his guns knocking them out. John Preston goes over to the 6 2nd in commands. John Preston gets a sword. The 6 2nd in commands pull out swords themselves. They all fight. John Preston slices Carlos and Jack and they fall dead during the fight. John Preston stabs Christian in the chest with his sword. John Preston now has Kiera, Max and Greg left. John Preston slices Greg and Greg falls dead. John Preston fighting Kiera and Max left Preston stabs Max in the chest and kills him. Now John Preston is just fighting Kiera. Kiera with her throws down her sword and goes for a gun from a dead thug. John Preston gets another gun himself. Keira: "Tonight you die for all those people you killed." John Preston: "If I hadn't turned my back on the society I would charge you for having your bellybutton pierced and your shirt." They shoot at each other. John Preston shoots Kiera with a good shot in the heart. John Preston now goes over to Tony Maine. Tony Maine pulls out a gun. John Preston: "It’s you." Maine: "Yes. I became chief of state to get to President Jurgen. I want world domination with Luciferian acts." John Preston and Tony Maine shoot each other. John Preston shoots Tony Maine in the head in the gun fight. Tony Maine falls dead. John Preston: "Not without incident."
Back to the police chief and SWAT team vs. the Tony Maine multiples. The SWATS shoot the rest of them with knives and they all fall dead. Everyone is rescued. Everyone leaves going home. John Preston: "Let’s all go home." The SWATS take away the knocked out thugs.
John Preston (O S): "I have defeated demonic thugs in the former Libria. I have freed my people from terror and oppression over those years. A new enemy could come among me in the former Libria. Those who survived are arrested in a prison where a prozium clinic was. A rebel that survived during the fall of Libria had replaced Tony Maine as chief of state. My city if free from crime and dictatorship."
Fade out to black
Roll Credits
Scene 20
End
Equilibrium 3: Victory of Balance
Casting Suggestions
Christian Bale (Batman Begins, Shaft, Equilibrium) as Commissioner John Preston
Vigo Morstensen (Lord Of The Rings movies, 1998 Psycho) as Lord Jardon alien dictator
Jennifer Lopez (Money Train, Anaconda, Out of Sight) as Jessica Sanchez-Preston
Hugo Weaving (The Matrix movies, Lord of The Rings movies) as Rebel Leader Link
William Fichtner (Michael Mann’s Heat, Equilibrium, Armageddon, The Perfect Strom) as President Jurgen
Daniel Baldwin (John Carpenter’s Vampires) as General Landis the general of Lord Jardon’s amry
Don “The Dragon†Wilson (not to well known martial artist who played a gang leader in Batman Forever) as Brakis second in command in Lord Jardon’s empire
Christian Karhmann (Equilibrium) as officer in charge of an investigation
Mathew Harbour (Equilibrium) as Robbie Preston John Preston’s son
Emily Siewert (Equilibrium) as Lisa Preston John Preston’s daughter
Daniel Lee Clark (Equilibrium, former Nitro on American Gladiators) as Chief Sanders former lead sweeper
No thoughts on who should play the alien rebels, Melissa Parker (daughter of John Preston’s second wife) or other officers. Also the same actors as the surviving resistance fighters.
Plot Summary: 10 years after the fall of Libria there are recently discovered planets in the Milky Way that have human life forms on them. A dictator named Lord Jardon wants the galaxy. He comes to Earth where in the first years of the 21st century a 3rd world war broke out. They had the anti emotions society. John Preston got rid of that. Lord Jardon and his forces invade Earth. There is Saturn 2, Uranus 2 and Mars 2 discovered in the universe. John Preston’s kids are growing up. Jurgen is on his 3rd term (and last allowed) as president of the world. He has 2 more years left. A man named Link comes to Earth after he hears about John Preston. Also the would be galactic dictator Lord Jardon hears about John Preston as the highest ranking cleric at the tetra grammaton. John Preston had learned the society of Libria was wrong. John Preston will join with Link in the fight for freedom in the universe. General Landis has soldier who can multiply themselves into many multiples. John Preston with the alien rebellion must fight together to bring down the alien tyrants. Jurgen must reject Lord Jardon as leader of the galaxy.
Beginning
Scene 1
Opening sequence with battle pictures in the galaxy. John Preston does narration. In those pictures rebels are being killed by tyrants from the universe. John Preston: “I am John Preston. I am still the commissioner of the police. I have defeated tyrants against emotions and I have defeated Luciferian tyrants before they went into power. 3 living planets have been discovered by recent space science. They are called Uranus 2, Mars 2 and Saturn 2. There is human life there on those 3 planets and wars going on at those planets. I am ready if they come to Earth.â€
Fade In
Scene 2
On Mars 2 in the day time. There are human alien soldiers somewhere in a house. There is an alien rebellion. They are humans from another planet. They have guns ready. They carry some other kinds of guns. Mars 2 Rebel #1: “There’s General Landis with his troops.â€
Outside there are storm troopers with General Landis. Some soldiers multiply themselves up. With the tyrannical military there is Lord Brakis. General Landis: “I haven’t found Link yet.†Brakis: “Just go into that house. Maybe you will find the rebel leader there. Let’s go kill those rebels.†Brakis sends in the team to take down the rebels.
Inside there are the rebels with guns ready. The troops with their general show up. The rebels and soldiers fire on each other. There is a gun fight. A lead rebel shoots at General Landis and General Landis shoots that rebel. Another rebel shoots a soldier and that solider multiplies in 10. Mars 2 Rebel #2: “Oh shoot!†The rebels are being slaughtered. All the rebels are dead. Brakis comes in. Brakis: “Good work General Landis.†General Landis: “Thank you Lord Brakis.†Brakis: “We will need to report to Lord Jardon’s spaceship.†They leave.
Scene 3
Later on in the space ship of Lord Jardon. Brakis with General Landis comes to Lord Jardon. Lord Jardon: “Earth is run by a man named Jurgen. He would’ve been executed if not for overthrowing a system of fascism against feelings. I’ll do an Earth search. I believe this is where Link the resistance leader has vanished to.†A soldier is at a computer and does a search on Earth. The troops even go after a man named Link from Saturn 2. They do a search for him. They find him on Earth. Jardon Troop #1: “Lord Jardon. General Landis. Link is on a planet called Earth.†Lord Jardon: “Let’s all go there. On this planet there is a police commissioner who was the highest ranking cleric. He overthrew the society against having feelings. He enforced those laws before joining the resistance.†General Landis: “Calling all ships. We are going to Earth after Link the rebel leader.†They all depart for Earth.
Somewhere on Earth at night time in a dance hall that was once the palace of justice in the same building that the incineration chamber was in at the former Libria. There are DJs there. There are several people dancing there too. Link and many of his rebels are there too. There are some females in Link’s rebellion. Female Rebel #1: “I think that Jardon has found us here.†Link: “I
think then we will have to go to the police. The police commissioner here has ended an act of dictatorship.†Rebel #1: “How did you know?†Link: “I have done studies on Earth. There was a society with laws against emotions. Having emotions was a capitol crime. The punishment was either being shot on sight or incinerated right in this building. This cop killed the dictator. Let’s go find this cop.†They are sitting at a table. They have rock n roll music there in the dance hall now playing.
Scene 4
At the house of the Preston’s the next morning. The television on the wall is on. There is the News. John Preston’s son and step daughter Robbie and Melissa are now in their teens. John Preston’s daughter Lisa is in her pre teens. They are in front of the television listening to the News. Melissa: “You better tell dad about what you are hearing Robbie.†On the news there are reports of alien sightings in the former Libria. John Preston was eating his breakfast and comes in on his 3 kids. Robbie: “Dad. There are aliens on Earth. They want to take over our galaxy. They want domination of Earth.†John Preston: “I’ll stop them. I ended Father’s dictatorship. Maybe I’ll end the dictatorship on other planets.â€
Scene 5
At the office of Jessica Sanchez-Preston. John Preston comes into his wife’s office. Jessica: “There are alien sightings in the former Libria. They are alien tyrants. A dictator wants domination of all the living planets in the galaxy.†John Preston: “Father had ruled the world. I know that he died of a heart disease and there were no feelings to that. Dupont took his place. Adolph Hitler wanted to rule the whole world and couldn’t.â€
In the halls. There is a bunch of guards escorting human alien rebels with Link their leader to see Jurgen. They stop into Jurgen’s office. Link: “I am Link the rebel leader. I come in peace. I am from a planet called Saturn 2. Lord Jardon wants domination of the galaxy.†Jurgen gets up. Jurgen: “I led a freedom fight. Freedom was outlawed. Some of my freedom fighters had tattoos and body piercings. They were illegal in this time. I would’ve been executed if not for John Preston commissioner of police joining my resistance.â€
Scene 6
Somewhere else in the former Libria in the day time. An alien space ship lands there. It is Lord Jardon’s ship. Lord Jardon’s ship opens up. There is Lord Jardon with Brakis and General Landis. Other ships land. They follow Lord Jardon. All the forces come out their ships. Lord Jardon: “Here on Earth we need people to recruit into my army. Then I get domination of this planet. Somewhere near here there is a prison. Let’s free the prisoners for joining us.†They find a prison that is where a prozium clinic used to be.
At a prison in the day time. At the reception area there is General Landis that wants all the prisoners for an offer to join Lord Jardon. General Landis: “I am here to free prisoners. They get a pardon if they join us.†They free all the prisoners who are all devil worshippers that John Preston had arrested.
Scene 7
Later on there is a meeting with Lord Jardon. They have all the prisoners. Lord Jardon makes an offer to them. Lord Jardon: “You are all freed. You can join us in my quest for domination of the Milky Way.†Luciferian Thug #1: “I don’t think so. We were for a Luciferian society.†Female Luciferian Thug #1: “We all won’t join you then.†Lord Jardon: “General Landis since they have refused my offer let’s have them killed.†General Landis: “You troops kill them all.†All the prisoners start running. They are all being slaughtered by Lord Brakis’s troops.
Scene 8
Later on at police headquarters in New York/the former Libria in the day time. John Preston is at his desk in his office. John Preston gets a report from Chief Sanders a former lead sweeper. Chief Sanders: “Commissioner Preston. The Luciferian thugs that we arrested a few years ago were escaped from prison. I believe that it’s the alien forces that killed them.†John Preston is walking down the halls with Chief Sanders. A rebellion shows up with their leader Link. Link: “Are you Commissioner Preston?†John Preston: “Yes. Who are you?†Link: “I am Link galactic rebellion leader. I have come to see the Commissioner John Preston. I have an offer for you to join my rebellion.†John Preston: “Yes. I will join. I joined the resistance against a society that I enforced. That was 10 years ago.â€
In a building where there is Jurgen’s office. Lord Jardon with his forces are walking down the halls heading to Jurgen’s office. They are being escorted by guards. Lord Jardon with Brakis goes into Jurgen’s office. Lord Jardon: “I am Lord Jardon a galactic presidential candidate. We are on the quest for galactic peace. There has been fighting in outer space.†Jurgen king of the world gets up. Jurgen: “We can’t live without emotions. What do you want?†Lord Jardon: “I would like you to join us. You are king of the Earth. I don’t have a thing against emotions.†Jurgen: “I’ll think about it. I just hope that you aren’t doing anything fascist.†Lord Jardon: “A galactic terrorist is on this planet. His name is Link. Please join us.†Jurgen: “I am not so sure if I want to do this.†Lord Jardon: “I’ll give you time to think about this.†They leave Jurgen’s office. Jurgen investigates those alien invaders.
Scene 9
Later at John Preston’s home outside at night time there is General Landis with his troops. They are awaiting John Preston. John Preston gets home in his car. John Preston gets out. John Preston is confronted by General Landis and his soldiers. General Landis: “John Preston.†John Preston: “Who’s asking?†General Landis: “I heard about you. I am from another planet. I heard that you were the highest ranking cleric and powerful fighter?†John Preston: “That was back in the late 2020’s and early 2030’s that I was a powerful fighter. I killed this dictator.†General Landis: “This is about freedom and peace. You can kill Link the resistance leader.†John Preston: “I won’t join you if you are tyrants. I joined tyrants before and I won’t again after I learned what society was wrong.†General Landis has his soldiers aim their guns at John Preston. General Landis: “If you won’t join us then I will have to kill you. I could even kill a powerful Earthling.†John Preston reverses their guns. He takes their guns from them. He shoots a few. They multiply. John Preston shoots others. General Landis vanishes. John Preston shoots more of them and figures their weak spot. He shoots them in the head. More multiples are made. John Preston is shooting more of them. There is a captain that fires on John Preston and John Preston shoots the captain dead with a gun. John Preston throws down the alien guns. John Preston pulls out 2 of his own guns and shoots them. They all fall dead. John Preston: “That should be all of you.â€
John Preston comes in his home. His 3 children approach him. They are cooking dinner. Lisa: “Dad. What was going on outside?†John Preston: “Tyrants from out of Earth offered me to join them. I refused. They tried to kill me. I killed them all.†John Preston later sits at the dinner table with his 3 children. Robbie: “You and I won’t be tyrants. I dropped the path onto becoming a cleric when you defeated Dupont. Father’s dictatorship was thwarted by you.†John Preston: “Maybe I’ll end the dictatorship before it takes Earth by a dictator from out of Earth.â€
Scene 10
In the space ship of Lord Jardon at night time. Lord Jardon is there with Brakis. General Landis shows up. He reports to Lord Jardon. General Landis: “Lord Jardon. John Preston refused to join us.†Brakis: “And I think that Jurgen and it looks like it refused to join us too.†Lord Jardon: “I will need you to have your troops kill John Preston and King Jurgen.†Lord Jardon has General Landis to send troops to kill Jurgen and John Preston.
At the tower of Jurgen’s office the next day. There is a captain with the troops outside. Jardon’s Army Captain: “You guys. There are guards. You’ll need to kill them to get to King Jurgen.†There are also guards who would’ve been executed 10 years ago there too. They all have guns ready.
In Jurgen’s office. There is Jurgen at his desk. Jessica comes into Jurgen’s office. They meet up. Jessica: “I believe that there are troops after us.†Jurgen: “I have my guards ready.â€
Back outside. The guards see the tyrannical soldiers trying to get in. They and the guys who were resistance fighters get into a gun fight. A few guards are killed by alien soldiers. They get into a gun fight. The others kill the alien soldiers. A rebel kills the captain.
Scene 11
At police headquarters outside there are soldiers with a commander. Jardon’s Army Commander: “Commissioner John Preston is in there. You troops get in there and we’ll kill him.â€
In the commissioner’s office there is John Preston commissioner of the police sitting at his desk. He gets a report of alien invaders outside. Police Captain: “Commissioner Preston. There are men here I think trying to kill you.†John Preston with some of his officers goes to deal with the aliens tyrants. They all have guns ready. Jardon’s Army Commander: “Open fire!†They open fire on John Preston. John Preston’s officers shoot back. John Preston pulls out his guns. He shoots the alien soldiers too. A few of John Preston’s officers are killed in the battle. John Preston kills many other alien soldiers/tyrants. The gun fight breaks out. The aliens multiply themselves. Police Captain: “Oh no!†John Preston: “They multiplied at my home.†The commander and more aliens keep firing. Link and his rebels show up. Link kills the commander. Link meets up with the police. Link: “Commissioner Preston. I’d like to join you in your fight for freedom.†The cops and rebels join forces in the fight for freedom.
Scene 12
Later on at night time at John Preston’s house. John Preston brings in Jessica with Link and his rebels. The 3 kids come up to John Preston and Jessica Sanchez-Preston. Melissa: “Mommy.†Jessica: “Melissa.†John Preston: “Melissa. Robbie. Lisa. This is Link. He is leading the freedom fighting in our galaxy.†Link: “I come from Saturn 2.â€
At Lord Jardon’s spaceship. General Landis reports to Brakis. General Landis: “My troops have failed at the police headquarters.†Brakis has General Landis take John Preston’s family. Brakis: “After school for John Preston’s kids bring them here for Lord Jardon.â€
Scene 13
The next day at John Preston’s home. John Preston’s kids are done with school for the day. They are coming home. General Landis is with his troops. The troops aim guns at the 3 kids. General Landis approaches the captured children. General Landis: “I’d like you 3 to come with me. Lord Jardon wants to see you. Don’t make a move or you kids will die. Don’t even make a peep.â€
At the space ship of Lord Jardon. There is General Landis with his troops and the captured children. General Landis: “I have the 3 kids.†Lord Jardon: “Excellent.â€
Scene 14
Later on at night time at John Preston’s home. John Preston outside his home parks his car.
He goes inside his house. John Preston finds his house empty. John Preston goes in search of his kids with his guns drawn. John Preston: “Robbie. Lisa. Melissa. Anyone home?†A captain in Lord Jardon’s army shows up. Jardon’s Army Captain #2: “They have been taken away to where the former Nethers is. They are to be taken by Lord Jardon. Troops attack the cop.†Some soldiers attack. They fire on John Preston. John Preston shoots all those tyrannical commandos dead. John Preston is now in a gun fight with the captain at his house. John Preston shoots the captain in the head. John Preston goes outside.
Scene 15
Outside John Preston runs into Link again. John Preston: “Lord Jardon’s army has taken my kids away.†Link: “I know. I am going to help you get them back.†Link and his band of intergalactic rebels come with him. They walk with John Preston.
At the former Nethers there is the space ships of Lord Jardon and his forces. John Preston with the alien rebels shows up. General Landis and his troops open fire. General Landis: “Open fire.†John Preston and the rebels fire back. It’s a vicious gun fight. A few rebels are killed by alien tyrants. John Preston kills a bunch of soldiers. General Landis: “Link.†Link: “Landis.†Link fights General Landis in a gun fight. John Preston sees Brakis and Jardon. He goes after them to get to his kids. John Preston gets to Brakis. Brakis: “You’ll have to fight me Commissioner Preston to get to your kids.â€
Scene 16
Brakis throws a kick on John Preston. There’s martial arts on other worlds. John Preston is fighting Brakis in a martial arts fight. John Preston kicks Brakis and Brakis high kicks Preston. John Preston throws a punch on Brakis back. They battle it out with kicks and punches onto each other. Lord Jardon is bringing John Preston’s kids outside his space ship. Lord Jardon: “Come on. Let’s see your father get creamed.†In the battle with the rebels finishing off Lord Jardon’s troops Link kills General Landis in a gun fight. The rebels set off explosives blowing up the ships. With John Preston sending a kick on Brakis sending him into the exploding ships. Brakis is blown up. All of Lord Jardon’s soldiers are defeated. Now Jardon is going to fight John Preston. Lord Jardon takes a gun from his dead general. John Preston pulls out his guns. Lord Jardon: “You have defeated my army but you shouldn’t defeat me. I’ll replace my army and general. Even my second mmand that you killed.†John Preston: “No you won’t. I’ll end your dictatorship before you get control over Earth.†John Preston fights the alien dictator in a gun fight. They shoot at each other. John Preston shoots Lord Jardon in the head. John Preston gets back together with his children. Link: “I killed General Landis. I am president of the Milky Way now. I won against Lord Jardon.†John Preston: “Let’s all go home.†They all leave along with the rebellion.
Scene 17
The next few days there is people noticing the defeat of Lord Jardon and his empire by the hands of Link and former Grammaton Cleric John Preston. They all celebrate victory on Saturn 2, Mars 2 and Uranus 2 . John Preston does narration. John Preston: “I have now defeated an alien invasion and won our freedom. Jurgen has signed a treaty with Link. Link is president of our galactic republic. The galaxy has freedom and peace. I have 3 times fought for freedom. We are prepared for anything else that could happen again someday in the galaxy. I am still running my local police department. Our world is also crime free.â€
End
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