j d worthington
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I can see that being the case, yes. For those readers, perhaps beginning with other things might be the best choice... or this one may simply not be to their taste due to that factor....
I'd say my main complaint against the novel is the dialogue at the end, which is a bit too stagily melodramatic. It works fairly well when caught up in the reading, but on retrospect, it seems a bit too contrived; so I'd call that a weakness. Also, there is a bit in the section where Ward is explaining to his father the need for his procedures, which gets a bit too close to the pseudoscientific mystical babble of occultists of the time, that is just a bit jarring; it's only a line in the middle of a very tense portion of the book, but the glow fades for a brief moment there, and the line comes off as a bit trite and stretched... one of those times when HPL should have heeded his own dictum about avoiding the jargon of the professional occultist. (Of course, it can be seen -- and perhaps rightly -- as a bit of a swipe at such people; nevertheless, occurring at the point it does, it takes ever-so-slightly away from the tension and emotional impact of the scene. This, too, I would call a flaw.)
I'd say my main complaint against the novel is the dialogue at the end, which is a bit too stagily melodramatic. It works fairly well when caught up in the reading, but on retrospect, it seems a bit too contrived; so I'd call that a weakness. Also, there is a bit in the section where Ward is explaining to his father the need for his procedures, which gets a bit too close to the pseudoscientific mystical babble of occultists of the time, that is just a bit jarring; it's only a line in the middle of a very tense portion of the book, but the glow fades for a brief moment there, and the line comes off as a bit trite and stretched... one of those times when HPL should have heeded his own dictum about avoiding the jargon of the professional occultist. (Of course, it can be seen -- and perhaps rightly -- as a bit of a swipe at such people; nevertheless, occurring at the point it does, it takes ever-so-slightly away from the tension and emotional impact of the scene. This, too, I would call a flaw.)