Looking back at my first chapter I'm havingn thoughts about changing the way I introduce my main character.
After having a strange dream he is woken up by a friend who he gets into a little fight with.
I feel like im already showing his bad side before you get to even see how he thinks and acts when he's alone.
I'm afraid he wont look like a likeable character to the readers.
I thought maybe he should awaken from the dream on his own and I show you what he is all about by showing you thoughts in his head and stuff.
Later I could have him get into a fight. (he needs to get into the fight...)
I'm very good at showing emotions and thoughts... blah blah when my character is alone. I feel thats where you see the true him.
I'm not sure what to do...?
How do you introduce your characters?
Around others or alone at first?
After having a strange dream he is woken up by a friend who he gets into a little fight with.
I feel like im already showing his bad side before you get to even see how he thinks and acts when he's alone.
I'm afraid he wont look like a likeable character to the readers.
I thought maybe he should awaken from the dream on his own and I show you what he is all about by showing you thoughts in his head and stuff.
Later I could have him get into a fight. (he needs to get into the fight...)
I'm very good at showing emotions and thoughts... blah blah when my character is alone. I feel thats where you see the true him.
I'm not sure what to do...?
How do you introduce your characters?
Around others or alone at first?