Re: Discussing the Writing Challenges -- September and October
Congrats to SF and Hoopy! My three votes went to
Oxman,
Hoopy and... I can't remember the third, though looking back through the stories, I think I gave it to
paranoid marvin. And despite the confusion over my entry, I got a couple of mentions! Thanks.
A couple of people have asked me what on earth I was going for so, whilst I remember, I'll try and explain it:
Never Trust Little Birds
When the Agency called, he took up their offer immediately. A few years of his life helping the greater good didn’t sound too bad, really.
But the war was tough and he was used as bait; the flames were almost too strong, but he survived.
The enemy captured him and took his soul, then sent him back onto the field, defeated, as a weapon against his own side.
@monkeyfunk "you're" not "your", learn to english
Sacrifice - the fella giving a few years of life for the greater good, and him being used as bait (a piece sacrificed for tactical purposes).
I thought more people might have understood the final line, but it seems I was wrong - it's a tweet to a fictional person with the handle "monkeyfunk" who, as implied by the line before it, is on the side our protagonist was on before being captured. The bit about his soul being taken away is a personal joke, which I'm sure I've used many times, about selling your soul and signing up to Twitter* - I didn't expect many, if any, people to get that, but I put it in anyway.
So, this "greater good" is obviously a war of two sides. Now this is the abstract leap which I think confused people - the comment to "monkeyfunk" is a classic example of what is called
trolling (making incorrect or offensive remarks to get an emotional rise out of your target - in this case, calling out their bad grammar with a sentence that itself breaks many rules of the language). The war, then? Why, it's the legendary
Flame War!
Can you blame me? I'm a CompSci who lives on the Internet - I'll take whatever inspiration I can get!
Hope that clears it up for people.
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The title, by the way, is a reference to the logo of Twitter - a small, blue bird. Some of you might know the saying, "You can never trust what you read on the Internet". Put them together, et voilà.