Sci-Fi/Fantasy Crossover story: Comicbook & Screenplay

[Deathfrommassive]

Fuzzy Modem I really like it, did you say you did the art as well?

 

[Fuzzy Modem]

Fuzzy Modem I really like it, did you say you did the art as well?

Most of it. I did have a bit of help here and there. Glad you like it There is a lot more artwork to see in the "extras" section of my website if you're interested- http://crossovercomic.com/index.php?page=extras -right hand column.

I'm fighting a cold, but I'll have that revised uncle/niece dialogue up... soonish.

 

[Chel]

Unfortunately I don't have the time to get into it properly right now, so I only glanced at the beautiful artwork, apart from the very first pages.

You don't need to use Alyssa's name so much, since there are only two characters present at the start. When you do feel the need to use Alyssa's name and "Uncle", there should be a comma present, i.e "Alyssa, come down", "They died in the war, Alyssa", and so on.

 

[Blackrook]

I think you meant to say "descendant" when you said "ancestor".

 

[Precise Calibre]

I'm digging the storyline. I'm digging most of the art. I'm not digging the 3-D CGI humans from the point where the king appears onwards. The look on his face when he is asked if he's ever battled the gods - extremely comical.

 

[Fuzzy Modem]

I think you meant to say "descendant" when you said "ancestor".

Really? I thought they were fairly synonymous. See why I need help