C Of K
Sunset colored eyes
- Joined
- Jul 10, 2007
- Messages
- 926
I really liked your stuff. When I come across fiction that is so naturally put together, it's difficult to spot anything wrong with it. I was enjoying it too much, I'm afraid. Of course there will forever be ways to improve on what you have, and I think given time, you will develop your style to do so. I'm not the person to give suggestions, though, because my advice would just as likely cramp your style as help it. So, I just wanted to say I hope you continue with this.