Many thanks to all the nice comments about my story.
Digs - yours is just far too emotional, brilliant. It really is going to be another hard decision this month
HareBrain and Slow I didn't think of the Guinness ad until you mentioned it, but now I can hear it in my head.
Soundtrack - something with drum definitely, the first song that came into my head was Revolution by The Cult or something suitably epic, Holst's Mars Bringer of War, some of Heaven and Hell by Vangelis or even the theme from Moonbase 3 - (that's an obscure one)
Star Girl - Inspiration, this one came out of nowhere, perhaps the old Micronauts comic series from Marvel, where universes exist at a microscopic level. Initially it was inferred that the Watchmaker was God, with everything revolving around him.