Writing Challenge Discussion -- FEBRUARY 2011

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Many thanks for the mentions, I really did not expect too many this month, so a double thanks, especially as there were so many, Stormfeather, Boneman, TEiN, Parson, Teresa, Chel, Brev, Nixie and Talysia (& anyone else I might have missed).

Even more unexpected was the receiving of two mystery votes, so a real big thanks to whoever chose my little tale.
 
Well done to the finalists...

Really pleased with the response to my entry this month, with lots of comments ranging from 'Odd' to 'Clever' - I'm just glad it caught your attentions.

And TWO votes, very pleased with that from among such a strong field, my thanks to cornelius and other the mystery voter, sorry if I missed you.
 
Congratulations to the finalists. Two excellent stories there.

Now the (main) voting is over, I noticed a couple of people thought my reference to a "siren's ballad" was a literal reference, where I intended it be just be a term for a song of impending doom. Just wanted to clear it up that I was trying to portray the constant "song" at the back of somebody's head when they are told they have a terminal illness; ie, even when it's not there, it's "there". It's an intensely personal subject and I was probably a little too self-indulgent with it to get the message accross that I wanted to.

This is the last challenge I'm participating in, though I don't think my stories will be missed that much! It's been fun while it lasted!
 
Congratulations Mosaix and Teresa.

Not surprised the votes were spread among more entries this month -- a really strong field.
 
Many thanks for everyone who mentioned mine at some point, especially to Challah for saying my entry made you laugh. Woot!

And of course, congratulations to Mosaix and Teresa!
 
Am very pleased to have both the Judge and Ursa mention my story. Thank you both!

Oxman, I wouldn't be so hasty to say "My stories won't be missed." Every story is a thing to itself. Some of our past winners went months before receiving their first vote, and then they won. If you can't take the time to write, or don't want to, that is 100% understandable, but if you think that they don't measure up. Don't kid yourself. Your stories will find their place among those which are admired.
 
Just for alchemist (;)), here's a breakdown of the puns and wordplay in my challenge entry this month. (Not guaranteed to be comprehensive.)

First are the words directly related to songs and those who sing them. Here's the entry with those words put in bold red:



Gunsingers of the Old West: “The Soprano Shoutout”

or “Punfight at the Hokey Chorale



Long ago, folk at the first ‘Bavarian’ village became fed up with stuffing the ballad box, stocking songs (“liederhosen”) and lining up at the bar. They craved to see duets between All-American Meistersingers, ones quick on the drawl.

Their descant into madness began with Lee Rick’s bass-less choruses of an accusatory tenor, got verse in the barbershop, and ended in sparks as “Buskin” Frank Leslie declared, “This tune ain’t big enough for both of us.”


I missed a trick, though: "declared" should have been "declaimed".

Other wordplay included: alluding to bar-lines; Lee Rick = lyric; there was a real gunfighter called Buckskin Frank Leslie; Shout was another song.

The story was "inspired" by the hit song, This Town Ain't Big Enough for Both of Us, by Sparks. This was the A side of one of the few (less than five) 7" singles that I've bought in my life.


Finally, I still blame Boneman....


(Note that there is at least one US "Bavarian" village, in Washington state, though I doubt that it was around in that form in the nineteenth century.)
 
Thanks Ursa. Okay, I got most of them, but I thought Frank Leslie must have been a pun, like Lee Rick.
And I missed Sparks too, durnit. Next time, I'm googling every single word.
 
Hey, Just wanted to thank Oxman! Read back over like the last ten pages and I saw where he named his vote. Thank you so much Oxman!
 
Thank you to everyone who mentioned my story, and of course to everyone who voted for it.

And to everyone reading this thread, whichever story you decide to vote for, I hope you will all vote in the tiebreaker.
 
And to everyone reading this thread, whichever story you decide to vote for, I hope you will all vote in the tiebreaker.

I would like to second what Teresa has said and can I also say that the Photography Challenge in the Technology Forum is looking a little light on votes right now.
 
I'm guessing the subject, abandoned, may not be giving the right impression when one come to vote.


(Though I have just voted and I don't even have a broken limb or anything....)
 
And we have a winner:
Mosaix!


Now on to March! (Which is already days late, thanks to that silly little February.)
 
Congratulations to Mosaix, another excellent month, and a tense tiebreaker too boot. I think my fingernails are chewed down to the quick, places swapped so many times, it could have gone either way, and either one would have been a more than worthy winner.

Congratulations once again to Mosaix and Teresa... now bring on March
 
Well things don't get much closer than that! Not helped by Teresa's entry being so good that I actually voted for it myself!

Many thanks for everyone who mentioned my entry and voted for me.

I'll put March's challenge up soon.
 
I'm going to agree with Stormfeather a superb theme -only trouble is I can see the future, it's going to inspire some real excellent pieces this month...
 
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