Ah well those were the first I've read from both of them and I just didn't like the writing style. It might be interesting to read the second one as that has a Linda Evans one in it and I quite like her collaboration with Weber on the New Multiverse books (Hell's Gate and Hell Hath no Fury). Sadly it's not looking much like that series will continue as I don't think Linda Evans hasn't written anything since 2007 due to health problems.