Two beginnings

[Hex]

Thank you very much!

I was trying to reduce the complexity of the time jump (train --> university and then back to train) which was why I tried writing the new opening. I like the sentence 'They came at breakfast time...' too, but I worried that since I'm already messing about with time a little, then to do another time hop, even if it is a mini-one, would be too much.

I'll need to think about it. Ideally, I need about 6 months to think about this, and a nice quiet drawer to put it in while I get on with my fudge zombies. However.

 

[Jo Zebedee]

Indeed:however. Much virtual cake coming and going across the Edinburgh-Belfast invisible
cake-string, me thinks. We'll get there. We will.
And then you can write your fudge zombies, and I can do my medieval castle ghosty thingie.

 

[Warren_Paul]

Working on alternative projects? that'd be nice.

My own zombies are feeling all but forgotten about.