AnyaKimlin
Confuddled
What I find difficult when I write the multiple first person is to remember that all the characters change.
For example Angus has an older brother Socrates, and he has a similar relationship with his brother's lover, Nate. The Abbot is his mentor and he is scared of him.
In Socrates POV - Socrates himself goes from strong, heroworshipped big brother to neurotic, terrified big brother. Angus goes from being a together king to being an annoying kid brother. Nate is a lover. The Abbot is a friend, someone he doesn't quite trust but he treats as an equal.
For example Angus has an older brother Socrates, and he has a similar relationship with his brother's lover, Nate. The Abbot is his mentor and he is scared of him.
In Socrates POV - Socrates himself goes from strong, heroworshipped big brother to neurotic, terrified big brother. Angus goes from being a together king to being an annoying kid brother. Nate is a lover. The Abbot is a friend, someone he doesn't quite trust but he treats as an equal.
