Re: 300 WORD WRITING CHALLENGE #7 (October 2012) -- READ FIRST POST
The Best Boots in the World
"Best boots in the world, he always said. Quiet when he fled Petrograd in the autumn of '37. Warm against the snow. He was wearing them when he found this place. He wore them when he married Aunt Sveta."
"That's why you keep them here?"
"Aye, waiting for Uncle Vova to come back. Have another glass?"
"Thanks. He left without his boots?"
"'s all a secret, my friend, but that'll be how the NKVD got him. Midnight, they hammered on the door. He pushes Aunt Sveta under the bed, runs for his boots. By the time she comes out, he's gone, the police are gone. The boots are all that's left."
"He runs for the boots?"
"Thought they could save him from anything. Got them in the Civil War from an old babushka behind the Church of Our Saviour. He was already in trouble with the Reds. She promised if he bought the boots, they'd never let him be found."
There's an uncomfortable silence. He's a good boy, Kolya, but his tongue'll get him in trouble one of these days. Talks too freely, says too much.
For the thousandth time, hoping his friend's ears are sharper, that the vodka might help them hear, I yell:
"In here! Kolya! I'm here!"
It's just as effective as it's always been. The magic that shrank me shrank my lungs as well. My voice is no louder than a mouse squeak. Fighting despair, I slide down against the sweat-stained heel. A hundred times I've climbed the smooth, worn insides of my boots. A hundred times, fallen. No one hears me screaming.
Safe forever, she promised, the old woman selling her husband's clothes in the alley behind the church. "They'll never -- nikogda -- never let you be found."
The Best Boots in the World
"Best boots in the world, he always said. Quiet when he fled Petrograd in the autumn of '37. Warm against the snow. He was wearing them when he found this place. He wore them when he married Aunt Sveta."
"That's why you keep them here?"
"Aye, waiting for Uncle Vova to come back. Have another glass?"
"Thanks. He left without his boots?"
"'s all a secret, my friend, but that'll be how the NKVD got him. Midnight, they hammered on the door. He pushes Aunt Sveta under the bed, runs for his boots. By the time she comes out, he's gone, the police are gone. The boots are all that's left."
"He runs for the boots?"
"Thought they could save him from anything. Got them in the Civil War from an old babushka behind the Church of Our Saviour. He was already in trouble with the Reds. She promised if he bought the boots, they'd never let him be found."
There's an uncomfortable silence. He's a good boy, Kolya, but his tongue'll get him in trouble one of these days. Talks too freely, says too much.
For the thousandth time, hoping his friend's ears are sharper, that the vodka might help them hear, I yell:
"In here! Kolya! I'm here!"
It's just as effective as it's always been. The magic that shrank me shrank my lungs as well. My voice is no louder than a mouse squeak. Fighting despair, I slide down against the sweat-stained heel. A hundred times I've climbed the smooth, worn insides of my boots. A hundred times, fallen. No one hears me screaming.
Safe forever, she promised, the old woman selling her husband's clothes in the alley behind the church. "They'll never -- nikogda -- never let you be found."
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