Re: 300 WORD WRITING CHALLENGE #9 (April 2013) -- READ FIRST POST
When The World Forgot
Kirsty drops the plate of burnt toast on our table. It'll be cold. It always is.
“Well, eat up,” she says, all sneers and fake tan.
Edith says nothing, just stares out at another miserable day. The doctor says she's depressed, but I know better. She's broken. This place has broken her.
“Eat up, I said.”
I will Edith to move, to eat even a crumb, but she doesn't budge.
“Right.” Kirsty pushes a blackened triangle between Edith's lip. Wide and scared, her eyes lock on mine.
And I sit. My gnarled hands refuse to move, but it's not just my body that has given up.
I turn from my shame to the window. Foam-crowned wavelets race across the beach, reminding me of a time when I wasn't so ... useless, so powerless.
#
Lightning flared from Zorn's fingers, tracing a line of agony across Reg's chest. But this time he was ready. This time he was stronger. He swung a meaty fist and knocked the smile off his face.
There was a whoosh, and a flash of green cape, and Zorn's black-helmed head dropped to the sand.
Edith stood with a bloodied sword, her hair billowing in the breeze, and she laughed.
As their troops cheered and made their way up the beach, he realised he'd never loved her more.
#
Silently, Edith struggles as Kirsty tries to prise her lips open.
“Open up,” she says. “Open your f***ing mouth!”
All the while, Edith looks at me, and I remember: when we were young; when we faced the next morning with longing, not fear.
Biting back the pain, I stretch my fingers. They clamp around Kirsty's wrist and I croak out a single word: “No!”
I no longer have superpowers, but I can still be a hero.
When The World Forgot
Kirsty drops the plate of burnt toast on our table. It'll be cold. It always is.
“Well, eat up,” she says, all sneers and fake tan.
Edith says nothing, just stares out at another miserable day. The doctor says she's depressed, but I know better. She's broken. This place has broken her.
“Eat up, I said.”
I will Edith to move, to eat even a crumb, but she doesn't budge.
“Right.” Kirsty pushes a blackened triangle between Edith's lip. Wide and scared, her eyes lock on mine.
And I sit. My gnarled hands refuse to move, but it's not just my body that has given up.
I turn from my shame to the window. Foam-crowned wavelets race across the beach, reminding me of a time when I wasn't so ... useless, so powerless.
#
Lightning flared from Zorn's fingers, tracing a line of agony across Reg's chest. But this time he was ready. This time he was stronger. He swung a meaty fist and knocked the smile off his face.
There was a whoosh, and a flash of green cape, and Zorn's black-helmed head dropped to the sand.
Edith stood with a bloodied sword, her hair billowing in the breeze, and she laughed.
As their troops cheered and made their way up the beach, he realised he'd never loved her more.
#
Silently, Edith struggles as Kirsty tries to prise her lips open.
“Open up,” she says. “Open your f***ing mouth!”
All the while, Edith looks at me, and I remember: when we were young; when we faced the next morning with longing, not fear.
Biting back the pain, I stretch my fingers. They clamp around Kirsty's wrist and I croak out a single word: “No!”
I no longer have superpowers, but I can still be a hero.