Pronoun confusion

[Jo Zebedee]

I'm about three quarters if the way through now and am still struggling. Not so much with the style anymore, I have kind of got used to it, but on a number of areas - not least around maintaining tension, about buying into the characters. I am disappointed, I really wanted to love it. Anyway I thought when I crawled to the end of it I might do a review.

 

[the Jester]

I thought it was reasonably clear, but if I was giving that passage an edit pass, I would definitely suggest to the author that she clear it up a bit. A name or two in there would have gone a long way, in my humble opinion.

 

[JunkMonkey]

that God himself must have sent down from on hight,

Your typo or theirs? I always thought the expression was 'down from on high' (Psalm 18:16 no less).

 

[Jo Zebedee]

Your typo or theirs? I always thought the expression was 'down from on high' (Psalm 18:16 no less).

Mine. . Me and touchscreen keyboards don't get along.