Malevolence - Tales from Beyond the Veil - Submissions Required

Another thought, Gary. Is this a wraparound cover design? (It's in landscape format, so I'd guess so.) In that case, the front cover would have a large white space just over half way down on the left, which I think might be too "open".

Ignore this if I've got it wrong.
 
I most definitely like the first best. The second image is flatter, it doesn't stir my imagination in the same way.

Just out of interest what does the artist prefer?

The first one :) She says 2 is a cliche:)

Oops, I meant with the *third* one, the colour difference is too extreme (if it wasn't obvious). Not trying to sway you to my choice (or am I ...?), but isn't the first impression most important with a cover?

If my first feelings are anything like my first, second and third drafts then no but I take your point. The overwhelming consensus is 1 first and 2 and 3 about equal second.

Anyone got a coin?
 
This gives you a better idea of the spine position. HB good point on the white area. :)

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That's easily fixed with a hacksaw and a bit glue, Aber. :)

PS sorry for the double post, mods. Please delete one. :)
 
Just a heads up. I have received nearly 90,000 words of marvelous stories that I think were good enough for Jeff Scott Marryat aka Boneman to edit/critique. He is doing this as we speak.

So far he has agreed with me so I may actually know something!

Cover artwork has been decided on and now I am setting up all the accounts on all publishing platforms for publication day. (don't know date yet as I am working on a marketing plan)

There are some really talented writers here and I kneel respectfully to his liege, IBrian for creating this wonderful place:) (Still time to get your Fantasy ghost story in, guv)

And for the mods for keeping people like me in line!;)

Two more anthologies being announced soon!

Onwards and sideways - LOL
 
That's an awesome cover. As far as colours go, I think a turquoise tint looks good, just to throw alternatives out there :)
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That's good Doz but I have spent two weeks changing my mind then changing it back, then changing it again (I used to be a woman in a previous life) so I will stick with my choice but you're hired for the next one LOL :)
 
Hey Gary...it all sounds really good. I am actually still working on a story to submit. Hope to get it done in the next couple weeks!
 
That's good Doz but I have spent two weeks changing my mind then changing it back, then changing it again (I used to be a woman in a previous life) so I will stick with my choice but you're hired for the next one LOL :)

The next version was thai-dye - probably best avoid my next 99 ideas, only 1% turn out worth anything :)
 
Hey Gary...it all sounds really good. I am actually still working on a story to submit. Hope to get it done in the next couple weeks!

No probs Ratsy. I have you on my list :) Hopefully book will be 120,000 words:)
 
That's good Doz but I have spent two weeks changing my mind then changing it back, then changing it again (I used to be a woman in a previous life) so I will stick with my choice but you're hired for the next one LOL :)


So that's what you were doing in that window long long ago :)

What's the deadline for the submissions Gary?
 
So that's what you were doing in that window long long ago :)

What's the deadline for the submissions Gary?

Haha, prob Xmas TEiN but I will wait if you are busy with a story. Could do with something really malevolent and gruesome!! Throats being ripped out by unseen ghosts etc!

Over to you.:)
 
I'm looking forward to seeing this in print, too. :)





Can I ask a dumb question, Gary? If you haven't got all the stories in because the submission deadline isn't here, how can you have chosen which stories are good enough and begin to edit them?

Or have I got the wrong end of the stick? (Which is quite common!) :eek:

I'm wondering if I should scrap my submission so you don't have to consider another 8k and find room for it if it is good enough! If you're already at 90k...




And LOL, Doz! I'd tried my hand at designing a cover, too! An ebook one. It was fun, but it's not what Gary is after:



At least it gets to see the light of day in this thread. :D
 

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