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I'm reading Brian Keenan and John McCarthy's recollections of their time as hostages, and it brought to mind something important about writing a story. Even more importantly @The Judge got a call out in a mysterious we-do-not-review-our-true-identity manner. ;) :)

JoZebwrites: A PROTAGONIST IN THEIR OWN STORY

I piggybacked on Jo's excellent blog post to ramble on about character worlds...and princess dresses. :D

Worlds Apart

I decided to add my own little thought to this train: Protagonists and Observers
 
I decided to add my own little thought to this train: Protagonists and Observers
Ha! This is turning into my most spun-off blog. It's an interesting question you ask and I shall go all cloak and dagger and go under a spoiler tag for those who haven't read Abendau's Heir

One of the things I was very sure of was that I wanted to be unflinching in showing what an ordeal of torture actually entails, rather than our rather flashy (almost sickeningly macho) typical fictional take. To do that, I knew I would have to lose Kare's voice - that, for a time, he would be too lost in the ordeal to be able to have a voice. Which left me in the tricky position of having a protagonist who would no longer be active in their own story. Which is why Sam* appeared. @HareBrain , the learned beta that he is worried about this on two counts:

1. Sam was a deus ex machina coming in so late. I felt I had no way to show him earlier without everyone knowing he'd be the doctor who would save the day. Since the bunny is the only person to have mentioned this to date, I think I got away with it.

2. That Kare was so weakened as a protagonist he would not be able to carry book two and three. Judging by reviews to date, that has not been the case, but it does make book one a harder sell as a trilogy starter than it could have been...

*Sam is, and always has been, a secondary character. But for the four or five chapters when Kare is lost, he carries Kare's voice for me (I hope). He is both the witness and the testimony.
 
I decided to add my own little thought to this train: Protagonists and Observers
Ha! This is turning into my most spun-off blog.

And the plot thickens... Who's going to be the next to take this a step further? :D

On a more serious note, very nice, Peat. Good take on the theme. And quoting Jim, too... Reading all Jim's old blog posts was what got me writing AND guided me through my first attempts at novels.

Jo, I thought Sam worked well. He did what was needed, and added a necessary humane counterpoint to all the horror.
 

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