had a thought about the white ship. if it hadbarely enough power for a tiny bit of electrical, then the environmental controls would be failing or out. i realize that you need the gravity sound effects, but what if there were pockets of low or no grav? freeflight bubbles where they would float, then could stumble as they hit the next gravzone. also because that is like bumping on a rollercoaster, you could have their stomachs protesting, then when they see the bodies, a little ill from it. then stumble back as the lights flicker on and he reales the 'branch' he felt through his suit is actually the outstretched arm of a body clawing its way through the door
and wouldn't it be cold in the ship. i mean cryogenically cold? the bodiesfrozen to the floor, frost riming the womansfloating hair, their wedding rings a dull sparkle in the flittering emergancy lights. upon their clasped hands. frozen tears shone in a static trail upon the man's face, his unseeing eyes fixedupon the womans.
and wouldn't it be cold in the ship. i mean cryogenically cold? the bodiesfrozen to the floor, frost riming the womansfloating hair, their wedding rings a dull sparkle in the flittering emergancy lights. upon their clasped hands. frozen tears shone in a static trail upon the man's face, his unseeing eyes fixedupon the womans.
