DISCUSSION -- July 2015 300-word Writing Challenge (#18)

Here are the votes of the Ursa jury, with the stories in posting order within the categories:


Honourable Mentions:
  • Pipe Dreams by Victoria Silverwolf
  • Roots by DG Jones
  • The Tree of Life by ratsy
Runners Up:
  • What's More Fearsome Than A Snufflemagoo? by Alchemist
  • Le Scorpion by Jo Zebedee
  • A Lifting of the Veil. by Venusian Broon
Winners:
  • Charlie by Remedy
  • What Little Girls Are Made of. by Phyrebrat
  • The Silver Sweetbriar by The Judge

 
Congratulations to Remedy on a smashing victory. I believe this story was ahead of the pack all the way through an exciting race. Well done!

Shouts of "Hooray!" also to The Judge for the silver medal and Phyrebrat for the bronze. Great job, both of you.
 
Congratulations, Remedy! Nicely done! :D

And to my other two votes, coming in second and third, or so Victoria just reported.
 
Congrats Remedy!! And a warm, cozy thanks to everyone who long or shortlisted me.
 
Wow, a vote from Void. Thanks muchly. A mention from The Judge. Thank you so much your honor. And, another mention from (not so mad) Alice. Oh, looking out my window on this cloudy day, ah, the sun has just broken through. :cool:

Edit: Congrats Remedy. Wow, what a month. So many great entries with a hand full of outstanding stories snapping at Remedy's heels. I think there will be a few chrons in need of finger nail replacements.
 
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Muchas gracias for the vote :D

Btw, the third person who voted for your story was A. Fare Wells, not me :) (I hope I still get to keep the vote you gave me :D)
:D Note to Self; Start writing in a straight line!
Sorry about that! Thank you A Fare Wells!
And yes, holland! Please do keep the vote! Your story of Emma left me all teary eyed. It was simply lovely.

CONGRATULATIONS REMEDY!! A well deserved win indeed!
 
Congratulation Remedy.


And thank you so much for the vote, Alice. I'm chuffed as anything.
(Is there an expression? Chuffed as a snufflemagoo or something? Anyway. I'm as chuffed as that and more.)
 
Congratulations, Remedy! You wrote a wonderful story--my fave, this challenge. It was such an exciting race! Congrats to those whose stories kept the voting exciting right up to the last hour. All entrants were winners though, as they say. IMO, this 300 worder had the strongest field of entrants of any I've participated in; expectation for the next 300 challenge is the only thing capable of making me wish summer would move along just a bit faster, and change to autumn.

And thank you!!! to Mad Alice for the mention! :)
 
Well done Remedy! A very well deserved win. And well done to TJ and Phyrebrat for the podium finishes.

I'm afk atm so big thanks to those who mentioned and voted for mine but I haven't yet individually thanked.
 
Congratulations Remedy on a great win.

I'm glad I didn't wreck the thread with my vote fail. For what it's worth, between the moment when I realised I had three votes, and the moment when I realised it was too late to use my other two votes, I decided that Cat's Cradle and Venusian Broom deserved them. Sorry to both of you.
 
Well done Remedy!A strong performance beating a strong bunch of runners-up. :)

@Glen - wow a sneaky vote past the end :D Thank you!. Don't worry about not voting, no need to be sorry. At least it's not a controversial 'got pipped to the post by one vote' situation. Just to be mentioned is enough for me.

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I do have a complaint though. However, nothing to do with everyone's excellent stories. I suspect it might be something hard-wired into the site software, but here goes: The percentages at the side of the poll are totally broken and irritate the hell out of me*

It looks like it calculates the percentage of the number of votes cast by the total number of stories. So this poll, if totted up gives an eye-watering 293%. Even in the 1 vote 75 worder, the number of votes has only equalled the number of stories 5 times out of 63 **, so basically most of the time these percentages are wrong. So either I think we should change it to the correct figure - votes cast - or if the software can't manage that get do that, just get rid of it. Because we are a site of SF&F writers and, we on the harder SF side of things should be at least getting the mathematical literacy of the site working correctly :).


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* As I love mathematics and numbers. They are my second language really. Well, well ahead of German.
** A stat brought to you thanks to @chrispenycate, for giving me the spreadsheet with all the 300 and 75 results...Of which I'm tidying it up and checking it in my own way at the moment...
 
Mega congrats, Remedy!! A good win and thoroughly deserved!


As soon as I saw this quarter's photo I wanted to write a folk/fairy tale type story, as it was such an obviously SF image and I believe in trying to confound expectations (ie being awkward and bloody-minded). Sleeping Beauty was the natural start, but it would have to be subverted, and for some bizarre reason I wanted Bluebeard in there (shades of Angela Carter). Nothing came, though, so at the last minute I had to scrabble around for something else.

The reason I was unhappy with what I produced is that the point of the story is that the daughter is herself a creation of the silversmith just as the bees and birds are, but no one realises. (His fear is that her secret will be discovered by her admirers whereupon they will take fright and destroy her as being unnatural, hence his wish to protect her by hiding her away, only to realise that that would itself destroy her, only more slowly.) I didn't want to give the game away immediately, so I only gave clues, eg by referring to her being "silvery" in confinement and "creating" her own children, though the biggest clue was in her name and the title -- eglantine is another name for the wild rose, which is also known as sweetbriar, so Eglantine = the Silver Sweetbriar. But having come up with the idea so late, I didn't have the time and spare word count to create more clues and avoid things which seemed utterly unambiguous (eg if I'd had more words to play with, I'd have avoided the word "daughter" and simply had her call him "Father", or if I'd thought about it just made her his "adopted" daughter *hits head against wall at being so stupid as to not see that sooner*), plus I might have produced a proper ending which made the twist clear. My fault for leaving it so late.

Judging from the comments people so kindly left, the whole twist went completely unnoticed because I'd done such a bad job with it, so all in all, I'm inordinately pleased that the story received so much very gratifying attention. As to which, more silvered thanks to Mad Alice and Ursa for the listing and very welcome vote respectively.


NB VB the %ages are based on the number of people voting, not the number of votes cast.
 
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At least it's not a controversial 'got pipped to the post by one vote' situation.

If it had been so close I probably would have kept stum...

Edit: I thought I might add that my story has been with me for years, but never made it to paper. The photo for this challenge immediately reminded me of it - a bunch of haves on the other side of a fence from a bunch of have-notes.
 

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