Fewer usage of the word flame is needed

[juelz4sure]

Maybe: His appearance evokes the roaring of a fire with his delicate flame-shaped ears, and red hair streaked with blue, white, yellow, orange and black.

That to me sounds really good!

 

[tinkerdan]

Perhaps his hair could be ablaze with the colors of fire.

 

[MWagner]

Teardrop shaped ears? And I like the hair ablaze with the colors of fire.

 

[James118]

His attention zooms in on a man with flickering blue skin at the top table; the man's clearly a foreigner here for the talks. Striking in appearance, he has flame-shaped ears and his hair is streaked with the colours of fire.

Ding, fixed. Probably a little too quickly, I may have rushed it.

 

[AnyaKimlin]

I might sneak ablaze in somewhere i like it too

 

[Mad Alice]

You could have an imaginary plant leaf..
Ears like a cut thorn leaf, a spiked pointed arc like a roaring fire.

 

[paranoid marvin]

I'm struggling to use flame less than twice in this description:

His attention zooms in on a man with flickering blue skin at the top table; the man's clearly a foreigner here for the talks. Striking in appearance, he has flame-shaped ears and his hair is streaked with every colour to be found in a flame.

How about

His attention is taken by a man with flickering blue skin at the top table; clearly a foreigner here for the talks. Striking in appearance, he has flame-shaped ears and his hair is streaked with every colour to be found in a blazing hearth.

(not too keen on 'zoom' to be honest)

 

[AnyaKimlin]

How about

His attention is taken by a man with flickering blue skin at the top table; clearly a foreigner here for the talks. Striking in appearance, he has flame-shaped ears and his hair is streaked with every colour to be found in a blazing hearth.

(not too keen on 'zoom' to be honest)

I love the Striking in appearance lol that's clever and brings in the idea of a match. I'll be using that bit thank you. I'm going to incorporate it into my description along with the clearly a foreigner.


His attention is taken by a foreigner at the top table, clearly here for the talks. Striking in appearance, the stranger has flame-shaped ears and his hair is all the colours of a roaring fire complete with a dusting of coal. Maybe the coal dust isn't natural it could be a gel -- I guess. Oh by the Universal Father, in whom I do not believe, it's like when Socrates gets me admiring his arse now this guy has me wondering about hair gel. "Who is he?"