DISCUSSION -- April 2016 300-word Writing Challenge (#21)

And very strangely I'm in on the first day.

Something really different from me this time, not sure whether it is going to make sense to anyone but me, but hope you all enjoy it anyway.
 
Good stories, all!
Yikes, I have finished mine...usually I am very excited to post, but this one just seems lame...not sure if I should salvage it, or try a new concept...I'll have to have a good think on this. But a really terrific start to the challenge, well done all! :)
 
Ashleyne. B. Watts -- This intense story of love and insanity takes us deep into the narrator's mind. Short sentences and paragraphs create a mood of tension. Slowly revealed details, all viewed through a very dark glass, show us the distorted perceptions of the narrator. At the end, the reader understands that madness lies within all of us.

farntfar -- By making use of a formal, deliberately old-fashioned style, the author creates a very real narrator. Thus, we come to accept the fantastic things he tells us. A combination of scientific thought and mysticism, both cleverly tinged with the flavor of a previous century, creates a curious and most unexpected fate for the narrator.

Perpetual Man -- In this heartfelt allegory of the creative process, the author makes the reader feel the pain and frustration that any artist must endure to bring works of quality into existence. Through the use of a powerful visual incarnation of the lack of inspiration, we are made to empathize with the narrator's agony. It is ironic that this fine work of the imagination deals with the inability to create such works.

Jo Zebedee -- With great gusto and panache the author brings a completely original narrator to life. A touch of the flavor of classic detective fiction (do I detect a wink and a nod to the Napoleon of Crime?) is mixed with extraordinary imagination to create a captivating tale.

Duttster -- The realism of hard science fiction is used here to create a quietly increasing sense of suspense. By telling this tale of invasion from the point of view of the intruders, the reader to made to examine humanity from the outside, making the conclusion even more poignant, while avoiding melodrama.

Juliana -- This emotionally powerful story seizes the reader's heart from the very start and never lets go. Ordinary details of everyday life serve to make the tragic nature of a fantastic premise all too real. A concept that a lesser writer would use only to provide gruesome shocks is here transformed into something which will bring genuine tears to the reader's eyes.

Rafellin -- The author has fun with the nature of this challenge, refusing to fit within the confines of its restrictions. By coming up with a structure which is completely unexpected, while cleverly not violating any rules, the author reveals a great sense of humor and merriment. The tale itself also conveys this sense of levity, with dialogue which is sure to amuse.
 
Thank you for the flattering review, Victoria. In truth, I hold no such 'high' ground.

The process...
*looks at picture* - "WTF?"
*clicks on picture*
*sees picture title*
*looks up Tawny Frogmouth* - Hears voice in mind asking: "Why 'frogmouth'?"
*writes what you see*
*shakes head* - "Really?"
:)
 
Thank you, Victoria, for your marvelous review.

The picture is inspiring some wonderful tales.
 
Ihe -- The author brings us into the world of this story by creating vivid characters whom we can recognize. We share their tragedies and small triumphs over adversity. Through this technique we come to feel the that the strange and mysterious fate which awaits them is very real.
 
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Got a core idea but haven't got an end / punchline. Very frustrating because I really like the idea.
 
OML, it's hard to keep my cursor from that Like button!!

Been working on projects... hope I'll have time to do a 300 worder... gots me an idea...
 
I love reading everyone's stories so much! it's exciting :)

Ashleyne. B. Watts: That is a dark tale, I like it.

farntfar: Clever and funny. I'm imagining the bird in the restaurant sat in a gilded cage head sideways looking over someone's shoulder at the menu :)

Duttster: Vivid descriptions, I’m there I can see it all.

Juliana: This is creepy, last summer I accidentally dug up a dog buried in our back garden by some past owner. Your story brought back the weird creepy sensation that experience caused in me.
 
I had an idea right away, but when I came back to it, I had no clue what I'd been thinking of...so I wrote something else. Cool stories so far everyone!
 
J D Foster -- This realistic science fiction suspense story reveals the emotions of the protagonist in order to make her adventures more real. Details are used to increase the verisimilitude of the setting and the characters. In addition to this, the author tackles an important theme dealing with the way in which a little knowledge can be a very dangerous thing indeed.

ratsy -- The powerful emotional connection between parent and child is used in this story to strengthen its appeal to the reader. By creating a seemingly hopeless situation, a great sense of tension is developed in the reader. As with any good story of struggle against great challenges, the road to success is not without its sacrifices.
 
Thank you so much, as always, for the fantastic review Victoria :)
 
Shyrka -- This technological fantasy draws the reader into a richly imagined alternate world. Through the use of convincing details, as well as believable characters, this time and place that never were seem as real as our own. As an added bonus, the author manages to perform the very difficult feat of making use of an entirely serious play on words.

Luiglin -- In this comic fantasy we find myriad concepts combined in a complex way, resulting in a hilarious outcome. One can only compare it to the intricacy of a Rube Goldberg machine. How in the world, one wonders, can this possibly work? And yet it does, and in a fine way.
 

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