IMHO Star Trek series pilots are not usually very good. I didn't like
Caretaker at all.
Encounter at Farpoint was pants.
Broken Bow was only so, so. I only really liked
Emissary and that drew heavily upon
Best of Both Worlds. So, this may not be brilliance but it shows lots of possibilities.
The scene on the desert planet just screamed Star Wars!!!
Clearly, Star Wars cannot have a monopolistic reserve on all stories concerning arid planets, so I have no problem with that and the creature was interesting.
The front loading with exposition feels painfully forced in the pre credit scene - To the extent I almost felt angry with how amateurish it seemed. "As you know, you've been my first officer for seven years."
You've taken that phrase out of its context. As it was said in context I wouldn't have flagged it up, but yes, I agree there was too much exposition and too little action. The action all comes in the second episode.
The star emblem - covered that enough. Just wrong.
There are too many aliens in Star Fleet. I'm not being racist here, they just hadn't explored that far yet. Founder members of the Federation are Humans, Vulcans, Tellarites and Andorians. Other ships we have seen from this era had 100% Humans or 100% Vulcans, except for Archer's ship, which had one Denobulan, and Kirk's ship, which had one Vulcan.
The "cowardly" Lt Cmd Saroo (sp?) alien on the Bridge also quickly became annoying. I hope he isn't a regular every week.
There was a lot of "looking at the wonders of the galaxy" (otherwise known as the special effects department have been given a new box of toys to play with) in this episode. They did the same thing in the first Trek film. Maybe they can't help themselves when they get new toys to play with, but they must realise that it is quite dull, and not a substitute for plot, and that it also very quickly dates as effects invariably improve.
The Klingon physiology and morphology was a little strange. They have developed very small ears. They also have weird shaped heads with ridges down the back of the neck - almost like the H R Giger "alien." However, they do have human eyes! Also, the swarthy human looking "Northern" Klingons are now totally absent and whitewashed away.
I wasn't a big fan of the subtitles and the Klingon language.
Not sure about the subtitles either (especially at the top of the screen as everyone else puts subtitles along the bottom.
The did use all the previously established Klingon mythology, such as the death chanting. I think they just take death very seriously rather than suddenly believe in goldyface.
In fact, there were lots of nods and winks to earlier Trek in this episode i.e. "We have Engaged the Klingons!" exactly as Picard said, "We have Engaged the Borg!"
To think hologram communications wouldn't exist by this show's time is ludicrous.
While I am quite sure that they would have holographic communications by this time,
TNG established that Holodeck technology was very new, and such a big deal was made in
Voyager of the EMH that it did seem odd. On the other hand,
Voyager had huge desktop personal computers too. It's really a problem with
Voyager rather than with Trek.
The Plot
A routine mission to check on a damaged communications relay leads to the discovery of a Klingon plot. Klingons haven't been seen for 100 years (god only knows what they've been doing.) As the Klingons only understand strength, the 1st officer must mutineer in order to try to prevent a war.
Where is the USS Discovery?