thisreidwrites
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For 75 words, it's really hard to get some kind of a plot in there - but it might be possible following the Story Grid technique. 5 Commandments of Storytelling: What They Are and How to Use Them
A faerie flew through my window. (Inciting incident: coincidental)
I didn't know they were real. Behind her were other things I'd hoped were not, and they call to me. (Progressive complication: revelatory turning point)
Now, I have a choice: follow the fairy, lose my humanity, and join the Dance, or refuse... and die of old age, but still myself (Crisis: best bad choice)
Only a fool would say no. (Climax: decision time)
Good thing my heart's turned to stone by the time my wife, too late, calls my name. (Resolution: the result of that choice)
74 words.
- Inciting Incident (Causal/Coincidence)
- Progressive Complication (Active Turning Point/Revelatory Turning Point)
- Crisis (The Best Bad choice/Irreconcilable goods)
- Climax
- Resolution
A faerie flew through my window. (Inciting incident: coincidental)
I didn't know they were real. Behind her were other things I'd hoped were not, and they call to me. (Progressive complication: revelatory turning point)
Now, I have a choice: follow the fairy, lose my humanity, and join the Dance, or refuse... and die of old age, but still myself (Crisis: best bad choice)
Only a fool would say no. (Climax: decision time)
Good thing my heart's turned to stone by the time my wife, too late, calls my name. (Resolution: the result of that choice)
74 words.