I'm sure of it, I saw it twitch, so I'm going to beat this horse till I'm sure... Anywho, this is going to be a long post. So you may not want to waste your time.
After perusing through numerous threads on the subject, more importantly having been duly chastised in the critiques section, I'm cornered into revisiting this subject. Unfortunately, the novel(s) I'm writing have some unique conditions that I must deal with (I bet everyone says that ). Nevertheless, I'd like to present some of those conditions, then a few options and get everyone's opinion.
First of all, I have a significant amount of 'world-building' and 'history' that needs to be presented to the reader. Total environmental collapse, all of North America's population and others crammed into a tiny area, that tiny area now made brutally oppressive and sectioned up, the government totally changing, 99% of population being brainwashed, and it goes on. Sorry, no butterflies, rainbows or lollypops.
The story begins in 2028. All of the above begins now (2018) and is wrapped up or in place by 2022. None of the characters are privy to the how's and why's of most of the above until the third novel. The little that the few can remember, is vague and mostly wrong... None of what I have stated thus far will be changed.
So, the reader is thrust into a very near future that is radically different in all ways than what they can relate to. Furthermore, life is intentionally extremely difficult and brutal for 63% of the population (250+ million) where the first two novels, and most of the third and forth take place-- Point being, without some background it ends up seeming senseless and brutal for no reason.
The second novel (2029) is already written (though can be edited regarding this info-dumping). A 'prequel' novel (2028) is being written currently wherein some of the massive info-dumping may be bled off into it. In fact if I don't, then it will again simply seem senselessly brutal.
Each novel will have various 'appendices' which are unavoidable. However, it is explained to the reader up-front, that they have the option of utilizing those ONLY if they wish to have the knowledge of the protagonist or an omniscient viewpoint. The deuteragonist viewpoint should avoid them. They however are NOT spoilers.
I require a progressively growing glossary for the government (some aspects cannot be shared until the second novel), each novel will contain a vocabulary for a new language which will also grow each revision, and each novel will have its own appendix for entire phrase translations. There are other appendices... However they add nothing to this discussion past they are there.
That brings me finally to the 'info-dumping/world-building' chapters currently in 2029, of which there are 5 of 40 chapters.
Just as with the appendices, the reader is told up front that if they wish an omniscient viewpoint, they are welcome to read these five chapters at any time. They are not spoilers. If they choose to read them as they come up, each explains just enough so the world gradually unfolds before them just after or before they encounter it. Where surprise is required, after. In other cases (like when nothing is happening with the characters (ex. travelling)) and when the reader should need a breather from the action, before.
Again, to not have that info makes the whole read seem chaotic, confusing and senselessly brutal. With them it makes what the reader encounters make sense.
Each of those five chapters are written like a story within the story. They each contain characters that are long gone by the time we begin in 2028. Though there are little facts and figures scattered throughout them and the stories are told in a 'third-person' point of view (with little dialogue between characters), they speak more to events and conditions that cause the world to become how it is. They each often relate back briefly to our protagonist (though honestly not to any consequential degree except in one).
Naturally... I read it and say; "this is incredible! Man I'm good!" Others may not so much...
Lastly, I have come to the conclusion that most of it (which a considerable amount of it is required) cannot be relayed by the protagonist, or told by new characters simply to recall these various aspects of history without derailing the flow of the protagonist and other characters... Then again, as said, those first-person characters are already there, viewed via a third-person viewpoint and it is told as a story.
So... That's what I got The question is, what to do with it?
I'm seeing these possible options:
1. Leave it alone, spreading out those chapters over the two initial novels as I currently apply them.
2. Bump them all to the appendices. The trouble there is, if someone simply begins reading, we're right back to that 'senseless brutality' result until they get to the end. Plus, it would make for an unreasonable number of appendices. Personally, "I" would find it (the story without them) enough of a turn-off that I'd stop reading.
3. Use item No.2, yet add in cues/markers where the chapters currently reside (IOW: See Appendix B).
4. (this makes me cringe suggesting it) Have a world guide (not sure what you'd call it) wherein some appendices and these chapters get shoved into. That guide would grow and be reissued with each novel. IT IS A TERRIBLE IDEA. I only say it to consider everything.
Anyone have any thoughts, opinions, suggestions? Is anyone still reading? Hello... hello, is this thing on, why is there suddenly an echo?
Thanks for any help you care to render!
K2
After perusing through numerous threads on the subject, more importantly having been duly chastised in the critiques section, I'm cornered into revisiting this subject. Unfortunately, the novel(s) I'm writing have some unique conditions that I must deal with (I bet everyone says that ). Nevertheless, I'd like to present some of those conditions, then a few options and get everyone's opinion.
First of all, I have a significant amount of 'world-building' and 'history' that needs to be presented to the reader. Total environmental collapse, all of North America's population and others crammed into a tiny area, that tiny area now made brutally oppressive and sectioned up, the government totally changing, 99% of population being brainwashed, and it goes on. Sorry, no butterflies, rainbows or lollypops.
The story begins in 2028. All of the above begins now (2018) and is wrapped up or in place by 2022. None of the characters are privy to the how's and why's of most of the above until the third novel. The little that the few can remember, is vague and mostly wrong... None of what I have stated thus far will be changed.
So, the reader is thrust into a very near future that is radically different in all ways than what they can relate to. Furthermore, life is intentionally extremely difficult and brutal for 63% of the population (250+ million) where the first two novels, and most of the third and forth take place-- Point being, without some background it ends up seeming senseless and brutal for no reason.
The second novel (2029) is already written (though can be edited regarding this info-dumping). A 'prequel' novel (2028) is being written currently wherein some of the massive info-dumping may be bled off into it. In fact if I don't, then it will again simply seem senselessly brutal.
Each novel will have various 'appendices' which are unavoidable. However, it is explained to the reader up-front, that they have the option of utilizing those ONLY if they wish to have the knowledge of the protagonist or an omniscient viewpoint. The deuteragonist viewpoint should avoid them. They however are NOT spoilers.
I require a progressively growing glossary for the government (some aspects cannot be shared until the second novel), each novel will contain a vocabulary for a new language which will also grow each revision, and each novel will have its own appendix for entire phrase translations. There are other appendices... However they add nothing to this discussion past they are there.
That brings me finally to the 'info-dumping/world-building' chapters currently in 2029, of which there are 5 of 40 chapters.
Just as with the appendices, the reader is told up front that if they wish an omniscient viewpoint, they are welcome to read these five chapters at any time. They are not spoilers. If they choose to read them as they come up, each explains just enough so the world gradually unfolds before them just after or before they encounter it. Where surprise is required, after. In other cases (like when nothing is happening with the characters (ex. travelling)) and when the reader should need a breather from the action, before.
Again, to not have that info makes the whole read seem chaotic, confusing and senselessly brutal. With them it makes what the reader encounters make sense.
Each of those five chapters are written like a story within the story. They each contain characters that are long gone by the time we begin in 2028. Though there are little facts and figures scattered throughout them and the stories are told in a 'third-person' point of view (with little dialogue between characters), they speak more to events and conditions that cause the world to become how it is. They each often relate back briefly to our protagonist (though honestly not to any consequential degree except in one).
Naturally... I read it and say; "this is incredible! Man I'm good!" Others may not so much...
Lastly, I have come to the conclusion that most of it (which a considerable amount of it is required) cannot be relayed by the protagonist, or told by new characters simply to recall these various aspects of history without derailing the flow of the protagonist and other characters... Then again, as said, those first-person characters are already there, viewed via a third-person viewpoint and it is told as a story.
So... That's what I got The question is, what to do with it?
I'm seeing these possible options:
1. Leave it alone, spreading out those chapters over the two initial novels as I currently apply them.
2. Bump them all to the appendices. The trouble there is, if someone simply begins reading, we're right back to that 'senseless brutality' result until they get to the end. Plus, it would make for an unreasonable number of appendices. Personally, "I" would find it (the story without them) enough of a turn-off that I'd stop reading.
3. Use item No.2, yet add in cues/markers where the chapters currently reside (IOW: See Appendix B).
4. (this makes me cringe suggesting it) Have a world guide (not sure what you'd call it) wherein some appendices and these chapters get shoved into. That guide would grow and be reissued with each novel. IT IS A TERRIBLE IDEA. I only say it to consider everything.
Anyone have any thoughts, opinions, suggestions? Is anyone still reading? Hello... hello, is this thing on, why is there suddenly an echo?
Thanks for any help you care to render!
K2