DISCUSSION -- OCTOBER 2018 300-word Writing Challenge (#31)

Gemal-4 @AstroZon - This story shows what jealous creatures humans are. It also shows how protective they can be. Any threat to them or theirs may result in precise and rapid retaliation. How different things might have turned out, had the people of Old Earth felt as protective of their planet!
 
Finally.
I am in with a story.
I was afraid most of the month that I will not be able to come up with something because the image didn't spark any idea worth writing. It was very hard to find something to fit that water/fishermen/farming theme and be SciFi enough for my taste.
Anyway, I hope the holes in my net plot aren't too big and the story will catch some votes :)
 
Peace is but a dream @scarpelius - When dealing with something... alien to you, it is always best not to make assumptions. This story puts that into prospective in a very clear manner. Now excuse me, but it's time for the harvest.
 
Fishermen @johnnyjet - There are jobs nobody wants, but are important, such as fishing. This story presents with a fishing job - one that will either make you strong... or mad as a hatter.
 
Sacrifice @stormcrow - Using an old nursery song modified to great effect, this author brings us a most unique tale of rituality. A story of sacrifice made merciful, as well as useful.
 
Sacrifice @stormcrow - Using an old nursery song modified to great effect, this author brings us a most unique tale of rituality. A story of sacrifice made merciful, as well as useful.

Thank- you :)
 
Shyrka: A sad tale of sacrifice and loss, but when you have the opportunity to give as good as you get, then sometimes it just has to happen. Paradoxical situations like this happen far too often, really…destruction of important places and artifacts to keep them out of the enemies’ hands. If only things didn’t ever have to be that way.


Daysman: I’m not familiar with foreign festivals, as the only time I’ve been out of the country ever was briefly to Canada for a couple of hours. This reminds me of what I’ve heard of the Festival of Lights from Japan, though of course this is for an entirely different reason. This, to me, was a sweet little story of hope, but sounds like it is a last-ditch effort, and I can only hope that this would be a success.


Perpetual Man: A story of combat and action, in some ways this reminds me of a joke I was read online somewhere. But from this story comes the old adage, desperate times call for desperate measures, and sometimes, while you know you’re boned from every direction, at least one option seems to give the two-way street you would hope for. When you know you’re done for anyway, it’s just best to say screw it and go for the dirty play.


AstroZan: Be careful of who you trust, and don’t reach for the stars when you should know they are out of reach. To have to create planets for sustainable life is a horrifying thought, but an interesting one. I’d just wonder, though, why create a second earth in terms of fauna, when there could be many other interesting creatures to make?


Scarpelius: The sad truth of humanity is, we’re easy to fool. There are, of course, a few skeptics amongst us here and there who wouldn’t fall for this kind of trick, I don’t think, but ultimately, in the end, if we’re to be cattle for the slaughter, we’re done for. This hit me hard because as much as I’ve lost faith in humanity in general, I really don’t want to see us end in this way.


Johnnyjet: This kind of picture used for this 300 challenge can be interpreted in many ways, and this interpretation of what is pretty much basically late-night Mardi Gras, it warms me a bit to see a story break off with a happy ending. A second chance at life is always something to rejoice about, and let’s hope the one who faced Thanatos down and survived will learn from their mistakes.


stormcrow: All sorts of sacrificial rituals across many ancient and indigenous tribes occurred throughout history, yet to me, this one seems just unnecessarily cruel and insidious. I don’t know to who/what these sacrifices would be going to, and I am all the happier for lacking that knowledge. Usually, sacrifices involved volunteers who went to a relatively quick death, but to be selected by one’s peers out of fear, to be sent out alone to die of toxin in your bloodstream, it just sends shivers down my spine.
 
It seems I'm not entering anything for my own picture! Ironically, it's a story where everything gets flooded that's been holding me back as I've spent so much time working on it. I've been to three writing workshops in the past two weeks but nothing relevant came from those either.

I'm looking forward to reading the stories from everyone else. :)
 
Pray @LittleStar - Meiun stays awake this night, providing these fishermen the light they require. But there are bigger and more dangerous fishers present! Ir's a good thing the gods are on their side. Or are they? Fickle, the gods be!
 
Astrozon: An entire system of worlds is created in a few words in this tale of the far future. In sharp contrast to its vast vision of unimaginably advanced technology, it also portrays the ancient strength of character which refuses to be subjected to the will of another.

scarpelius: In this tense science fiction story of invasion we witness extraordinary events through the eyes of ordinary individuals. By showing the way in which monumental conflicts effect two people, we understand that all of us are part of history.

johnnyjet: The author presents a grim future, yet one with a trace of hope. By casually making use of highly plausible technical advances, the setting becomes as real as our own time.

stromcrow: Through creative use of language, a strange and mysterious world comes to life before our eyes. The inevitability of the protagonist's fate reinforces the ritual nature of the words and the setting.

David Evil Overlord: This tale turns expectations about high fantasy upside down, to comic effect. A touch of satiric intent is evident in the way in which the self-justification of the antihero serves as a reflection of all-too-common human foibles.

LittleStar: Two parallel situations are depicted with great subtlety in this deceptively quiet fantasy. The wisdom of the characters is evident in the way they understand the importance of caution in a world full of hidden dangers.
 
sigh, first draft done and it's 800 words. and that's leaving half the story out too. I don't know if i can get this down to 300 in what little time i have left....
 
sigh, first draft done and it's 800 words. and that's leaving half the story out too. I don't know if i can get this down to 300 in what little time i have left....

You might not make the 300-word challenge, but you've got a 1600-word short story in the making. Good stuff.
 

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