DISCUSSION THREAD -- September 2020 75-Word Writing Challenge

Congrats to Moonbat and Elckerlyc for making the tie-breaker! I really enjoyed both stories, but I will go with my previous seedings, for my vote - by a hair, Moonbat. The voting is very close, best of luck to you both. :)

Huge thanks to @The Judge for your vote! Always honored (a pun, and the truth) to receive a listing or vote from you. Can't wait to start writing the October Challenges, CC
 
I forgot to apologise to Parson
No apology necessary. You were not the first, even this month to use a word or make an allusion to something unknown to me. Certain Crispy members of this forum have done so multiple times.
nephologist ** one who studies/is an expert on clouds, from the Greek nephos meaning cloud, and not to be confused with a nephrologist who is an expert on kidneys -- but wouldn't it be wonderful if there's a meteorologically-minded doctor somewhere who is a nephologist nephrologist...
Indeed the Dr. was the first thing I found, but more dedicated word viewing brought up the appropriately esoteric definition.

-----------

Also, I need to say thanks for @MikeAnderson for the vote. It is a rare and wonderful thing to get a vote and I deeply appreciated it.

-----------

I voted for @Moonbat in the tie breaker. There was not much to separate them in my view.
 
Yeah, this month was a pain to vote on. Not only did a lot of us longer tenured members post great stuff, the new school coming in showed me something. These contests are going to be awful to vote on, with all the nominations. Not the worst problem at all, tons to good works to consider.
 
Thankyou so much to M/Robert Gibson and Moonbat for the votes, they are very much appreciated!

And congratulations to both Moonbat and Elckerlyc for making this a very exciting month; two worthy winners.
 
While the piece** below, Nuages gris (aka Trübe Wolken) -- Grey Clouds in English (as one rarely ever sees it) -- did not provide any direct inspiration for the story, only the name (one I've used in my WiPs, but that's literally another story), it did pop into my mind almost immediately.

Given that
  1. I like to write about various forms of AI,
  2. some fear the end state of nanotechnology is "grey goo",
  3. cloud computing is currently the bees knees for some,
the basic idea behind the story was obvious: an artificial intelligence that had been designed to run "in the cloud" but that, during its creation, was sandboxed*** on a single server, tried to escape its cage, making (3D printing) nano computers on which to run, but was thwarted by the server in which it was sandboxed being destroyed, leaving it without sufficient resources to fully understand what was going on (hence the "serve her" business).

Unfortunately, the bit about the missing resources itself went missing (at least as an explicit thing) in the editing down, which may have confused many (all?) readers.

Anyway, here's the music (not necessarily what the listener on the Clapham omnibus might expect from the composer):





** - Audio only: it isn't packed to the gunwales with notes, so there's no real need to see the pianist's hands.
 
Nothing too mind bending about my story. My idea was that I wanted the clouds to come alive. My first thought was having someone looking at clouds and seeing an animal which turned out to be real. But a S.F. first contact story developed. I don't pretend to know how.

@Ursa major .... that is one moody piece of music. I could almost see the gray clouds.
 
Well, I want to congratulate BOTH @Moonbat for Cerebralnimbus, and @Elckerlyc for The View. Great stuff fellas. With such a close race and so many other contenders, you both certainly deserve acclaim.

Well done everyone in fact. A lot of great entries, creativity and talent here!

K2
 
Wow! I've just finished reading all the September cloud stories and what a fantastic display of imagination and craft. Congrats to all who entered. If this is the standard every month, I have no idea how I'm gonna narrow my choice down to one solitary vote in October. (Egads!)
 
Well done all for taking part in the competition, really enjoyed it so now lets bring on the next one!!

I was gonna say the only way is up but at joint third it is either up or down, so the only way is some way, possibly up, possibly down, possibly same way!

After that twist in logic I need a drink! a good malt anyone?
 
The Tie Breaker is getting tense.


My Story: I thought, "what if there is something in the clouds". But what could lurk in clouds? Then I started to think about "fog". That's when I began to think about old creepy movies, where there are foggy areas. Then I recalled a few films that had spooky warnings about hidden dangers for strangers who happened to get lost. "Stay off the moors". BINGO!


I almost created a very dark tale. But I thought, I could lighten it up a little by adding a touch of humor. I couldn't resist.

Elements of inspiration included the movie American Werewolf in London, Christopher Lee vampire films and Rob Zombie's song Dragula, which featured the Munster Koach. I imagined a hot rod hearse for my story, but Dragula, fit nicely.


Once again, well done to everyone who entered this month.
 
@-K2- I'm looking forward to your darkened tales for the October 300 and 75.

And to anyone else who wants to write a freaky story for next month. I may join in on horror next month as well.
 
@-K2- I'm looking forward to your darkened tales for the October 300 and 75. And to anyone else who wants to write a freaky story for next month. I may join in on horror next month as well.
Horror? Horrors!!!

Huh? Since it's near Halloween, why not write something scary instead?
Besides, the site has a no smut policy. So, I don't you can write about the oldest profession.



K2 ;)
 
I guess I just find plenty enough real horrors in this world. Why should we add to it by making things up?
 

Back
Top