Red Silence Green Song blurb (again)

I really like this. It gives plenty of information about the characters, the plot and the history of your world. I agree with the idea that the first part should be written by the History-Man, as if he's actually telling the story.

The only issue of mine is a pet peeve with repetition. The repetition of "the only" in the first paragraph is a little off-putting for me personally as it seems that you're pushing the solidarity a bit.

Otherwise, I love this. It sets the stage for this epic fantasy world where (from my limited perspective) there are definitely going to be some plot twists and secrets along the way. It's beautifully written, informative and I want to know more.
 
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