Avoiding -ing verbs?

Rufus Coppertop said:
If I read this - 'He waded through the swamp eating a bean burrito'. - I would have an image of some bloke wading through a swamp eating a bean burrito.

Isn't that what the author needs me to see?
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As the author of that sentence, I can confirm that was my intention.
 
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