DISCUSSION THREAD -- December 2021 -- 75 Word Writing Challenge

OK, sorry voting took me so long, I don't see members of my family all that often. And I have a short list.

The shortlist went: Cat's Cradle, Guttersnipe, JS Wiig, Moonbat, msstice, Provincial, sule, and ,Cat's Cradle, Guttersnipe, JS Wiig, Moonbat, msstice, Provincial, sule, and The Judge with The Judge getting my vote.

Looks as if I wasn't the only one to have difficulty finding analysis/voting time - bit short of votes this month.
 
Well done , Cat's Cradle, that truly was a moving piece of writing.

And also well done to The Judge for a creditable defence of her title in second place.

And I've just noticed another vote from Pyan, thankyou so much.
 
Great job @Cat's Cradle .... it was a very nice piece.

Now, did anyone catch the little extra I threw into my piece? I know @The Judge did but no one else mentioned it.

My story was written simply to underline my desire to lift Christmas meaning past materialism and it's appropriated cartoon minions and put the emphasis on the reason for the season.

(And, yes, I know the date is very unlikely for Christ's birth.)
 
Congrats @Cat's Cradle.

I went back to 1521 and Wynken de Worde's Christmasse Carolles for my inspiration. The "Boar's Head Carol" is a macaronic 15th century English Christmas carol that describes the ancient tradition of sacrificing a boar and presenting its head at a Yuletide feast - thank you wikipedia, saved me some typing. It is also one of the earliest known examples of a carol.

Mix that in with some bad Tudor English and a Blackadderesque idea of Wynken, a German immigrant in England (hence the Yule in the title), bringing a boar's head to his wife after being cruelly conned by his English friends in the pub and then challenged by his spouse to come up with a carol.

The Boar's Head​


The boar’s head in hand bring I,
Bedeck'd with bays and rosemary.
I pray you, my masters, be merry
Quot estis in convivio

Caput apri defero
Reddens laudes Domino

The boar's head, as I understand,
Is the rarest dish in all this land,
Which thus bedeck'd with a gay garland
Let us servire cantico.

Caput apri defero
Reddens laudes Domino

Our steward hath provided this
In honour of the King of Bliss;
Which, on this day to be served is
In Reginensi atrio.

Caput apri defero
Reddens laudes Domino

And in all its sung glory

Note. The rumour is that Pratchett used Wynken de Worde as his inspiration for his character William de Worde in the Discworld novel, The Truth.

And that's it folks for 2021 and me. A glorious first half with a 75, 100 and 300 win to a dismal second half.

So long, and thanks for all the fish.
 
How nice! Thank you all for the congratulations, and to add to my earlier Thank Yous I am grateful to The Judge for her vote, and chrispenycate for his listing.

I was very happy when I saw The Judge's choice of Open, for the genre, and though I think it's too soon for me to choose it again, I hope we see its return some month next year.
Congrats to everyone who participated in the Challenge, well done all. I thought The Judge might catch me, I was aware of paranoid marvin's late push (and really thought Victoria Silverwolf wrote a brilliant story, too).

I don't usually comment on my entries (as I hope they stand on their own legs), but as I mentioned early on in the Discussion thread that this one was for my mom, I'll say a few things. My mom grew up in the Depression, and I have very few pictures of her from when she was young... personal cameras were a luxury at that time.
I thought, a few months ago, about yearbooks (printed yearly in most US high schools since, I'd think, the first third of the last century). I searched on ebay and I found, in December, the yearbook for my mother's class during her junior year of HS. They posted a few representative pictures of the book's pages, and there was a zoom feature, so you could get a closer look at what was posted. And I saw in the Drama Club photo (not Choir :)) my mom and her best friend (who'd later become my aunt, as she married my mother's older brother). It was a picture I'd never seen before, and as my mother was very active in school, I figured there'd be other photos of her I'd not seen, so I ordered the yearbook (which sadly hasn't arrived yet; slow travel these days, for packages between the US and Europe).
And my mom was one of the many people we all know who were afflicted with Alzheimer's... so, one day at 4am early in the Challenge I woke up with the story I posted, complete in my head (but complete at 150 words). My mother always wanted me to be a writer, but I've always felt guilty because I never really tried, and that is, I think, why I am here these last eight years entering the Writing Challenges. Okay, that's the history of my story. I'm going through a spell of insomnia, so forgive me if it was too much info.

I will try to start 2022 with inspiring choices for genre and theme. It's the only thing about the 75 worder that I find intimidating - if I should win one, choosing the next month's genre/theme.

Also, Dan J. and Phyrebrat, let me know when you need the recording. :) I have the Voice Recorder app on my laptop, and can try coming up with something in the next few days.

Okay - off to wake up with some black tea. Hope everyone has a safe and happy New Year's weekend, and thanks so much, again, CC
 
Congratulations, CC! I knew that story was a winner as soon as I read it!

And many Christmassy thanks for the further vote, Chris P!


I hope those who voted by stealth and without giving a shortlist now feel it's safe to appear and confirm how they voted and why, since nothing can now affect the voting or people's thoughts -- let's have a good end of the year conversation here!
 
Thank you, everyone! :)

I have one choice for genre and two for theme... I am hoping at least two of the three are acceptable, and will send along for verification soon, CC
 

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