To write, or talk, about the gay scene from the 80s -- mid-noughties without mentioning AIDS is inauthentic and a whitewash. (The thing that has changed is we tend to refer to it as HIV, not AIDS nowadays.) In those decades AIDS was to us as the Cold War fear was to kids growing up in the 70s and 80s. It saturated everything. If she had not mentioned it, then she'd be blind, and for the sensitivity reader to claim this was homophobic was, quite frankly, ignorant of their own history. And gay life in small seaside towns is experienced differently than big cities like Manchester and London who have a far more diverse gay scene, so how many gays did she get as sensitivity readers?