therapist
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@Paul J. Menzies Hi. Welcome to the forums, and thank you for giving me such an in depth critique. It's really appreciated. I'm currently reworking this first scene and taking a lot of what you said into consideration. Also don't worry about being too hard. I'm trying to make this draft as good as it can be, so being soft would've been doing me a disservice.