DISCUSSION THREAD -- JUNE 2023 -- 75 Word Writing Challenge

Since people like the discussion on the collapse of our techno-industrial civilisation once our energy reserves run out, let me cautiously add another 2c. Green energy (solar, wind, hydro, tidal and geothermal) has two major problems:

a) the energy sources aren't available everywhere
Hydro works fine in a place like Norway, where there are plenty of dammable rivers capable of supplying energy to a small population. Thermal works fine in Iceland with plenty of undeground heat that supplies more power than its small population needs. But with larger populations there is a limit on what hydro, tidal and geothermal can supply.

b) the energy sources are erratic
This applies to everything except tidal and geothermal. 80% of Brazil's electricity is supplied by hydroelectric dams thanks to the huge Amazon river system, but in times of drought the water levels drop off substantially and blackouts are the result. Wind and solar are by their nature erratic, solar especially so as there is a big difference not only between night and day or cloudy and clear but also winter and summer.

In consequence one is obliged to create a far bigger infrastructure than one would originally think necessary, in order to collect and store energy for the lean periods. In particular gigantic battery arrays.

So far I haven't come across any serious study of the industrial requirements that will be needed to extract all the raw materials necessary for the quantities of wind turbines, solar panels and batteries we will need, and the further requirements necessary to maintain this huge infrastructure and dispose of its used components. But everything suggests that far, far more energy drawn from green sources will be required to maintain its infrastructure than energy drawn from oil, coal, natural gas and uranium is necessary to maintain their infrastructures. Let's just say that electricity will be come very expensive and you can kiss goodbye to your Tesla. Take an electric tram or walk instead.
 
a) the energy sources aren't available everywhere
Very true, and it's not just hydro and geothermal; plenty of places where wind and solar just don't work very well, or at least work well enough often enough to make any sense to install them. One thing I'll say about geothermal, though, is that even if you're in an area that doesn't have the underground heat to generate electricity, you could still use it to heat your home, which isn't as important everywhere, but where I am the average low temperature is below freezing seven months out of the year.
b) the energy sources are erratic
I'm not exactly high on the idea of gigantic battery arrays to make intermittent renewable energy production work, but I'm not sure what viable storage alternatives exist right now.

That's one thing I find cool about the idea of space-based solar, is that in theory it should be consistent, but it also comes with its own host of issues, including but not limited to space launch costs, large land requirements for energy collectors on the surface, the possibility of a Dr. Evil type character taking control of an array of giant frickin' laser beams in space. People are working on it, though -- In a First, Caltech's Space Solar Power Demonstrator Wirelessly Transmits Power in Space
So far I haven't come across any serious study of the industrial requirements that will be needed to extract all the raw materials necessary for the quantities of wind turbines, solar panels and batteries we will need, and the further requirements necessary to maintain this huge infrastructure and dispose of its used components.
I haven't seen any such study for renewables, but I did stumble across something similar for nuclear. If I'm remembering correctly, at the number of plants necessary to scale up nuclear production to satisfy world energy needs, at current nuclear plant operating lifespans, worldwide we would be both constructing and decommissioning a new plant every single day, which is obviously not exactly feasible.
Take an electric tram or walk instead.
I had intended to whine about having to walk everywhere in a city known for its urban/suburban sprawl, but it turns out we apparently have the most extensive urban pathway and bikeway network in North America. Drat. (also I mentioned how cold it gets here but evidently 40% of cyclists here will ride no matter how cold it gets)
 
Let's just say that electricity will be come very expensive

I think this is unfortunately true. I was quite shocked when I realized how much these fast chargers cost per kWh delivered. I think we assume that electricity is cheaper than gas when it comes to transport, and sure enough that has traditionally been the case. But once the costs of expanding power generation and (very significantly) distribution are passed on to the electricity customer then we could all be in for a shock (pun intended). Bear in mind that the cost of oil has nothing to do with its production costs (it is basically set by a cartel - OPEC). Running a cartel is typically a criminal offence in most sensible nations. But fossil fuels have a historic exemption. If electric power generation and distribution companies are allowed to adopt a similar model then I don't see why electric cars will be cheaper to run than gas cars. If the public can afford tanks of gas right now, then - according to cold hard capitalist logic - they can afford to spend the same on charging in the future.
 
. . . (it is basically set by a cartel - OPEC). Running a cartel is typically a criminal offence in most sensible nations.
I mean, have you seen the list of member nations of OPEC?

Algeria, Angola, Republic of the Congo, Equatorial Guinea, Gabon, Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, Libya, Nigeria, Saudi Arabia, United Arab Emirates, and Venezuela, with three countries who were members but whose membership lapsed in Ecuador, Indonesia, and Qatar.

There's also a few non-OPEC countries who participate with OPEC initiatives like voluntary supply cuts, known as OPEC+, including Azerbaijan, Bahrain, Brunei, Kazakhstan, Malaysia, Mexico, Oman, Russia, South Sudan and Sudan.

Not exactly bastions of progressive thought. I wouldn't expect them to give a you-know-what about much more than maximizing their own profit when it comes to oil and gas, regardless of the potentially destructive consequences.
 
@JS Wiig .... God’s Eye .... Is a story that illustrates how human hate is both tenacious and fragile.

@genelewis .... Just Another Day .... Is a story that candidly illustrates a matter of perspective.
 
@Bren G .... Enemy Within .... a story which makes me want to stand up and cheer, or as the Mandalorians say: "This is the way."

@reddishbird .... Birthday .... a story which takes on planetary dimensions and new beginnings.

@sule .... Building a New World from the Ashes of the Old .... A story where the catalogue says it all.
 
Had a tough time thinking of a title for this one! I still don't think it fits right, but I'm already in it, so there ain't no turning back now.
 
@johnnyjet ..... Justice Served .... This is a story of advanced retributive justice.

@paranoid marvin .... The End ? .... This story answers the question posed by T. S. Elliot.

@emrosenagel .... To Make a Man of "Modern" Thought .... A story to make us think about what qualifies for "Modern" thought.
**I thought your title was fine. Fit the story well.
 
@Perky ..... Frog Concert .... Is a story which hints at something momentous in the past.

@Paul J. Menzies .... The Mental Midget's Magical Mystery Tour de Force .... Is a story about the dangers of substituting wealth for insight.
 
I've never voted in one of these things before. Looks harder than coming up with 75 semi-cohesive words.

But after perambulating the thread a couple of times, I think one stands out. Most of the stories have two of the three elements: construction and destruction. Likely all of them actually, I wasn't keeping score in that regard. And then there are some that have those two elements and the third, deconstruction, a couple going as far as to describe or refer to a process of deconstruction as part of the narrative. Which is awesome, but it also makes it tough to have a hit with readers, because it brings us into the realm of "inside jokes." Ie, if the reader knows nothing about deconstructionism, then the reference might fly over their heads. Regardless, the ones where I've caught the reference go on my short list. Nailing three challenges in 75 words is hard and these authors deserve to be on some list somewhere, and not just the inpatient clipboard at the local loony bin, either. Those three-fers are:


Heaven Can Wait by Victoria Silverwolf
Spearmint by Far Stranger
The eternally practical literary analysis of AI Metacritic Sub Process BZF3158 by AnRoinnUltra
Enemy Within by Bren G

But there's a story that I think contains both construction and destruction... and is itself an actual deconstruction. To me that level of elegant solution stands a little above the ones that reference deconstructionism, or a process of deconstructing. Now I may have missed something, so if anyone has spotted any other stories that are also themselves a deconstruction, please point them out... you know, so I can have even an even bigger problem voting, lol. But right now, leading the way for me is this brilliant effort:

The Eternal Lament of Music by Phyrebrat

Now I want to be sure I'm not reading too much into that piece. Would anyone agree or disagree this story is itself a deconstruction? Also, am I doing it right? Should nailing the triple challenge be a major factor in determining which square on the roulette table I should push all my chips onto? I understand this is a pretty unique challenge this month, and that for most months nailing the challenge is not going to have that weight. How is everyone else going about it this month?
 
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@Starbeast .... Elimination of Evidence .... a story that makes me wonder if a human could actually stand up to that much temptation.

@Rjalex .... New Priorities .... a story about the truth of what makes a priority.
 

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