Le Panda du Mal
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I read a history book, printed by a serious academic publisher, that was clearly rushed to completion since there were a few places with brief notes just like this (e.g. King So-and-So --- may have been son of X--- built some monasteries --- married a Byzantine princess.--- avoided war with Seljuks) which the author forgot to convert into complete sentences.The more I write, the rougher my first drafts are and the more I rely on editing to make them better (in some cases, coherent). I think this is a matter of confidence, although it can lead to some odd problems. When I was editing God Emperor of Didcot before sending it to the publisher, I was surprised to find a blank space with the words "Fight scene here, Smith wins" which had to be filled.