I started on Hyperion, am at the first frame story and I have a question to ask this crowd: I will describe what I am looking for and you can tell me if I should continue: I like authentic writing (WHAT?? And why are you on a SFF forum then???!!!). Of course we are here to make up stuff, but we have our own scars and lives that show through. I like that.
Potential early stage Hyperion spoiler below
Hyperion _to me_ reads like a story LLMs will be cooking up in a few years. It has a waterfall of jargon that doesn't quite make me feel I'm in the future because the people are doing ordinary things.
The first frame story reads like a pulp fiction adventure in Africa from the 1930s complete with dengue fever and a "Bowana" like character. I don't consider these things racist (yes, of course the visitors from England needed African porters ("natives") and of course, because the English only spoke English the Africans had to learn a smattering of English to earn money from them, and of course it sounded funny, because, I mean have you ever spoken, or tried to speak, English?) but it is a bit derived and when not done well, a bit tedious. Hemingway is someone who could pull off this adventure in Africa stuff, and this is not in this league.
So. Does it get better? Does it get authentic? Does it start to be futurey with Humans that behave differently because they are in the future? Or is it just more pastiches like this one?
If I will be disappointed by Hyperion, now that I have bared by soul to you, would you have a different recommendation for me? Thank you.