Ready to start draft 3.

I don't have a lot to say here. Leaving aside the details, if the overall question is "Would you read on?" or "Is this good enough to justify continuing?" I would say "Yes" to both, although (no offence meant) those are quite low fences to cross. It doesn't seem fundamentally broken or wrong to me.
Thank you, Toby. But I'm not quite sure I agree 100%. There's been more than a few times that only a paragraph or two was all that was needed for me to know whether I'd want to continue. That's both pro and non-pro.

PS. You're perfectly welcome to provide any details you may have.
 
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