Going back to the threat of killing off characters. I think it's excellent that no-one is safe. Mark, you've proved again and again that you are more than prepared to shock the reader (not just by killing characters) and so I think the unpredictability is very refreshing in your books. Not that you need any advice but something I'm now a victim to... (although obviously I'm nowhere near to being published) ... don't EVER play a game of pool where the power to kill off a character goes to the winner! I lost, and now my cousin can remove any one of my people at any point he chooses! D'oh!