WARNING Long posting SORRY!!!!
LOL......If you wait until it's finished you'll be waiting quite a long time. And it isn't really a fan fic. It started out as an actual novel about ancient and modern Egypt seen through the eyes of two women linked by blood. It hadnothing to do with Stargate, until my treacherous hand and part of my mind decided that incorporating this into the story was the way to go. There is also a whole other version which is nothing to do with Stargate at all.
I say it's not a fan fiction because in my view Stargate fan fiction nearly all comes into the realms of Sam and Jack and their possible relationship, a tortured view of Sam and Jack and their relationship, Just plain and simple tortured Daniel, equally tortured Sha're, humour in which the author gives their view of events in the SGC headquarters or offworld, and also always from the point of view of the humour and bond between the group and their heroics. Sam and Martouf and how Sam is coping with the torture of him dying.
Always about how very nasty the Goa'uld are (and how nasty the Tok'ra may well be, except for Jacob and Martouf of course, who are generally excluded from this, the former because, well he's Sam's dad, so he can't be ALL bad and the the latter, because he has such nice blue eyes and a redeeming gentleness and Sam might have fallen in love with him so therefore we have to find exceptions in his behaviour which prove the rule)
The stories of the fan's ideas about how hideous the tortures the Goa'uld inflict and their total lack of morality and any redeeming features.
My argument with the last one is that we are projecting our own worst characteristics on what would be, in reality, a completely different culture and species, with their own laws and moral codes.
We don't have that right.
I guess you could argue that the Goa'uld wouldn't have the right to occupy a host body without it's consent, and judging by our moral codes, you would be right. But the Goa'uld would have a completely different moral code, and just because we don't agree with it, wouldn't necessarily make us right and them wrong.
We are in reality nowhere near being ready to make 'first contact' with other species, because we are too bound up in our own hangups. In reality Jack and his sarcastic humour and ascerbic, off the cuff attitude would not be made into the person who steps into another world and meets another culture head on. He may well be the best person to militarily protect a party of diplomats, but he would not BE the leader when it came to talking, it wouldn't even be Daniel. It would be someone trained in diplomacy. Someone who wouldn't step on toes or take matters into their own hands.
I am getting off the point really, but what I am trying to say is that, as Thor said, It is not a perfect universe, O'Neill. Yet the fan fiction AND the show always has SG1 toddling through the Stargate, bumping into slack handfuls of System Lords and other assorted aliens, saving worlds with their own particular brand of morality which isn't always appropriate OR welcome and whether the people of the world want it or not, and then toddling back through the Stargate in time for supper.
My story is a story of discovery of two people, one from Earth, and she has hangups and self doubts galore, the other from a warlike hostile species, used to being thought of as a god, and obeyed. They are thrown together in situations from which they have to go back to basics to learn how to interact with each and the people around them. The humans have a bad side, and so do the Goa'uld. But somewhere inside there is also a good side to both and redeeming features for both. And that would, in reality be the saving of a galaxy. An ability of both to accept the other for what they are, live with and be able to iron out the main difficulties. The old Start Trek maxim - the IDIC - Infinite diversities in Infinite combinations!
Oops.....off my soapbox now!!
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