Re: Writing Challenge Questions, Answers, Comments -- (Formerly: Proposed Competition
I'd prefer only one vote. I don't need two in the photo challenge voting, so why do I need two now? As a voter it's my responsibility to consider each entry until I pick a favourite. Sometimes it's harder than others, but that's a good thing. If I like other entries too, I'm free to state it along with my vote - but I
want to have to pick an overall winner, not two. I want to help
the person I consider the best to win.
Chrispy said:
So wrote it. Compact, not too much fat on it: over two hundred words, three times what I needed.
That's what I found, too! It's been a great learning process: I wrote a very condensed story in 174 words, and I was proud of it. After all, it had once harboured desires to grow into a novelette! Then I had to try and condense it down to 75...
Somehow I got it down to 100, although a fair bit of the less important detail was gone. Then I watched the blood drain out of it as I got to 90 words, and there was
nothing I could remove after that which wouldn't murder it completely. Five words later I'd convinced myself that I should bite my tongue and use a couple of ugly adverbs in place of nicer word combinations... And then I extracted my ending quote that tied it all together, along with a line that (upon reflection) was vital to keep in so another part didn't confuse the reader. But... I had made it to 75, and it was alive!
Sure, the insides had been stretched, disfigured, broken, swapped, and beaten - but my story had survived! (Albeit soulless.)
Two things I've learned since? Never try to crunch a long story down if that's what length it should be; just write a different (and short) story instead if you haven't got a big word count to play with. And 2) Never write when you've got a cold and haven't had chance to check it when in a better frame of mind. It seems the "Always let your work rest for a few days before going back to it" rule applies here, as well!
Anyway, it's been a fun learning process. I'm looking forward to trying a new style of writing in the next challenge.
I have to say, though, there's been some excellent entries so far. And yes, thank you, Teresa, for everything!